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Shadoe
pressed within your kremlin folds
i found solace
deep in paper mache walls
colored in a kaleidoscope of teals
& scribed with delicate thoughts
is the keeper of tears
lest one be forgotten
sacred jewels
born of beautiful pain
she brought me to her broken ribs
& uttered this is my marrow
don't taste of it
the pain too palatable
you understand not its exquisite
yet demanding nature
drink vodka from my breast
& be enchanted instead
under her petticoats i hid
observing this unearthly woman
the gods own design
the shape of her pale white thighs
her delicate neck
who charmed Adonis from the sky
a matryoshka doll
when i think i've reached her core
she reveals hidden layers
& more divinity is uncovered
private ballerina
pirouettes across life's stage
her poetry etched on the walls
of the great halls
her words eternal
who gently stirs passions
for a taste of her essence
men go to war
she speaks to mortals
& deities alike
in repose i first saw her
& wept for the beauty
i love,
yet will never truly understand
*for Katja there isn't another like you in all the universes..
I love you beautiful..
love brenda
Copyright © 2018 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
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crimsin
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Published 15th Jan 2018
| Edited 16th Jan 2018
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15th Jan 2018 2:56pm
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18th Jan 2018 2:12am
thank you beautiful Daniella the if there is beauty then it is in the poetess who inspired.. I cherish you dear one..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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15th Jan 2018 4:08pm
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18th Jan 2018 2:13am
thank you graciously dearest Tim for hearing my heart in this poem..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 4:18pm
What an awesome tribute to an awesome lady. I sit in silence, in complete reverence. Brenda, take the longest bow. Rob x
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18th Jan 2018 2:22am
thank you dearest Rob for such a gracious comment the poetess is really a uniquely gorgeous person..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 4:28pm
Crim, this is an amazing tribute to our dear Shadoe.
Absolutely stunning
Absolutely stunning
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18th Jan 2018 2:23am
Re. Shadoe
15th Jan 2018 6:42pm
Crim you did her absolute honor, n I'm positive she's gonna have a shitload of smiles n kisses n hugs for you!! Bbeeeaaauuutttiiffuullll dedication to DU's one n only... :)
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18th Jan 2018 2:24am
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 7:56pm
my love, an absolutely breathtaking tribute to one of the loveliest poets I have been gifted to "meet"...you honor the beauty she has in all aspects of "being"....take a well deserved bow...
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Love Taryn
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Love Taryn
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18th Jan 2018 2:27am
thank you graciously my love I am blessed to know her as I am you.. you ladies never fail to inspire me..
I love you madly..
love Brenda
I love you madly..
love Brenda
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15th Jan 2018 8:32pm
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Re: Re. Shadoe
18th Jan 2018 2:45am
thank you dearest Ghost men are plenty glorious in there own right.. i've written countless poems inspired by the male poets :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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18th Jan 2018 3:21am
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18th Jan 2018 3:40am
thank you dearest Ghost you're right in the way you view things I appreciate the thoughtful comment & for seeing us ladies in such a light.,
love Brenda
love Brenda
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18th Jan 2018 3:43am
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Re. Shadoe
15th Jan 2018 8:33pm
what a wonderful tribute to a wonderful poetess...
love your lovingness
Jeff
love your lovingness
Jeff
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18th Jan 2018 2:35am
Re. Shadoe
16th Jan 2018 00:08am
I do not know this poetess... but since she has inspired you to create such a work.. I shall go check...
love
H
love
H
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Re: Re. Shadoe
16th Jan 2018 00:12am
thank you beautiful Hanuel yes check her out
she is really a breathtaking poetess :)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/_shadoe_/
love Crim
she is really a breathtaking poetess :)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/_shadoe_/
love Crim
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16th Jan 2018 00:20am
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18th Jan 2018 2:36am
Re. Shadoe
16th Jan 2018 00:12am
Wow such a beautiful piece that creates a beautiful picture of am certain a beautiful woman
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Re: Re. Shadoe
18th Jan 2018 2:38am
thank you most graciously she is breathtaking when you get a chance check her out.. welcome to DU..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Shadoe
16th Jan 2018 1:15am
pressed within your kremlin folds
deep in paper mache walls
is the keeper of tears
lest one be forgotten
Private ballerina
don't taste it
Under her petticoats I hid
Very powerful undertow. This is a save(which I've just learned how ti do).
deep in paper mache walls
is the keeper of tears
lest one be forgotten
Private ballerina
don't taste it
Under her petticoats I hid
Very powerful undertow. This is a save(which I've just learned how ti do).
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18th Jan 2018 2:39am
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2018 2:58am
My gods dear gypsy. This is an incredible tribute to her. Your an amazing writer. There is no one like you.
Lovingly,
Beth
Lovingly,
Beth
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18th Jan 2018 2:41am
thank you graciously beautiful Beth for the love on this write.. not another like you for me either..
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. Shadoe
17th Jan 2018 5:59am
Now this amazing poem is indeed an incredible tribute. Bravo Brenda.
Shalom...Harry
Shalom...Harry
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18th Jan 2018 2:42am
Re. Shadoe
17th Jan 2018 3:46pm
what a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady and such a great poet - Katja is such a lovely souls and truly inspirational - sending Scottish warrior vibes to stand beside her :-)))))
Beautiful poem :-)))))))))))))))))))
Beautiful poem :-)))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Shadoe
18th Jan 2018 2:43am
thank you graciously dearest David love your warrior vibes :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. Shadoe
17th Jan 2018 5:16pm
who is this shadowy biatch? off with her macabre head!
holy crap, brenda
i don't even know what to say. i love this. not for the tribute but the writing. it's just humbling. just really fucking humbling & tear jerking.
as poe said... fuckton of love & hugs being sent your way
xoxoxo
holy crap, brenda
i don't even know what to say. i love this. not for the tribute but the writing. it's just humbling. just really fucking humbling & tear jerking.
as poe said... fuckton of love & hugs being sent your way
xoxoxo
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Re: Re. Shadoe
17th Jan 2018 10:37pm
thank you beautiful one
you are deeply inspiring
I was resting & couldn't sleep
pressed within your kremlin folds
kept coming to mind..
so I got up & began to write
knowing immediately this write was for you
you stay on my heart & i'd been missing your gorgeous presence..
i'm so happy you liked this it's from my heart to yours..
I love you..
love & hugs..
Brenda
you are deeply inspiring
I was resting & couldn't sleep
pressed within your kremlin folds
kept coming to mind..
so I got up & began to write
knowing immediately this write was for you
you stay on my heart & i'd been missing your gorgeous presence..
i'm so happy you liked this it's from my heart to yours..
I love you..
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. Shadoe
18th Jan 2018 9:23pm
I particularly like your description of the "unearthly woman." I suspect shadoe will be delighted.
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20th Jan 2018 2:26am