UTOPIA, PARADISE LOST

Beautiful imagery of Utopia Grace! Lost perhaps or just never found, but in dreams they exist for a little while we release the stress of reality...
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Hi Poetryman, you are so right. I have dreamed repeatedly of the same scenario in different angles, perhaps an escape from real life...but if God gives me a choice of paradise, this is what  I will choose. Thank you so much for reading me:)😊

Wonderful piece of poetry, Grace. Love the imagery.





~anonshadow

Thank you so much anonshadow:)

Your vision of Utopia is moving, particularly given how rare it is to find the elements you offer here.   Their gradual loss is tragic.  I love your wording and layout, Grace.  

Hi Crowfly:) thank you so much for reading me and leaving kind comments.

As a bird lover and flower lover I enjoyed your beautiful nature poem. Super freeverse style. Kudos.


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Nice to read, this is a good reflection of nature.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Kind of feels sad, being that Utopia is Paradise Lost. Literally a perfection that will never be.

I love the use of nature, especially all the flowers. Even if I've never heard of frangipanis.

Thank you for dropping by and reading Madcinder. Frangipani is a common fragrant flower in the tropics.