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'Tranquil...'
At first light...
Dawn, silently breaks
dew...damp-dusted,
sleeps 'pon bladed grass
Anew, a hesitant sun wakes...
Published 4th Dec 2017
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4th Dec 2017 10:38am
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4th Dec 2017 10:49am
This is so so beautiful....the vibes work from every word.....I want ot show my admiration for you.....
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Big hug, RoseJasmine
4th Dec 2017 10:52am
Aaawww...u Lil sweetie pie, thank you! Deeply grateful always for your support :)
4th Dec 2017 12:39pm
Oh what a soothing poem ... it's exactly what I saw during my jog this morning. Bravo PD, bravo.
4th Dec 2017 1:39pm
I'm deeply honored by the fact that I was clearly in ur thoughts, becuz I 'saw' these images thru ur eyes :)...thank u sweetness, always... :)
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 2:51pm
You set the mood and took us there. Tranquil and beautiful!
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4th Dec 2017 10:00pm
Thank you my dearest...I'm happy you liked, n I'm grateful for your thoughts always :)
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4th Dec 2017 9:41pm
...then feels
the hand of fate
as cloud drifts by
she lay upon his rays
soaking up the sun
into the wetness
of her rain
tranquil morn
heats up
becomes a storm...
the hand of fate
as cloud drifts by
she lay upon his rays
soaking up the sun
into the wetness
of her rain
tranquil morn
heats up
becomes a storm...
4th Dec 2017 10:04pm
Wow...that's an awesome addition to my piece! I'm very flattered my sweetheart... thank you
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5th Dec 2017 2:01am
Thank you my sweetness, I'm pleased you liked it. n as always I'm deeply grateful... :)
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 00:48am
You’ve taken me to an oasis of serenity amidst the bustling winds of the storm brewing here <3
7th Dec 2017 4:17am
Hey just to be sure u can escape ur crummy weather, I'm down to take u to the beach whenever! lol...thank u so much sweetness...
7th Dec 2017 4:17am
This is simply written and really feels "tranquil" as one reads it. An excellent job!!
7th Dec 2017 8:23pm
Aaawww...thank you so much E...that's a very sweet thing to say, n I'm very grateful... :)
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 7:09pm
Simply beautiful.
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10th Dec 2017 2:48am
Curled in my chair, gazing out my window at the snow covered Christmas decorations in my yard, as I bask in the glow of your thoughts.
So many thanks, Poe
So many thanks, Poe
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