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What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
Wallowing in a mud bath of ego
Having no regard for anything save self
Arrogant bully boy
Tickles with a fist to the gut
Love dissipates as the fear rises
Only desperation thrives
Vivisected heart removed and crushed
I have never understood staying with a cunt
Scared is my assumption
Needs a knight of rescue
Or a broad daylight escape
Terrorists are married men
When both are contributors
Half and half in all things
Attaining and giving support
Thoughtful communication always
Love means commitment and honour
Orders are never given, polite requests preferred
Victory over the accepted conventional norms
It is so easy a format to follow
Simply two become one love
Having no regard for anything save self
Arrogant bully boy
Tickles with a fist to the gut
Love dissipates as the fear rises
Only desperation thrives
Vivisected heart removed and crushed
I have never understood staying with a cunt
Scared is my assumption
Needs a knight of rescue
Or a broad daylight escape
Terrorists are married men
When both are contributors
Half and half in all things
Attaining and giving support
Thoughtful communication always
Love means commitment and honour
Orders are never given, polite requests preferred
Victory over the accepted conventional norms
It is so easy a format to follow
Simply two become one love
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Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
4th Dec 2017 2:32am
I never known what you're going to post next David! I enjoy the moments when I check my feed and your pieces are up on the queue :)
These are good stand-alone points, great stuff!
These are good stand-alone points, great stuff!
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Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:01am
I never know either (lol) Thank you much I am so glad you liked them :-))))))))
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
4th Dec 2017 2:39am
Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:01am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
4th Dec 2017 6:04am
Wow spot on! Though poignant, also inspiring =)
Fave line: "Victory over the accepted conventional norms"
Fave line: "Victory over the accepted conventional norms"
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Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:04am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 8:06am
So true are these points!
Bear Hugs Brother !
Bear Hugs Brother !
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Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 8:07am
So true are these points!
Bear Hugs Brother !
Bear Hugs Brother !
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Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:06am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
4th Dec 2017 10:26am
It is as you say David!
Now how do I get me summadat?
Let me have summadat!
Only want summadat.
Volcanic summit dat erupts
Ending loneliness with summadat in LOVE!!!
JJ
Now how do I get me summadat?
Let me have summadat!
Only want summadat.
Volcanic summit dat erupts
Ending loneliness with summadat in LOVE!!!
JJ
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Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:08am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 3:16pm
You always paint truth in vivid colors, so there can be no mistake in its reality. Loving this one, my friend. Sending so many hugs your way :-)
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Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:11am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 9:31pm
David! Oh my dear heavens how I just adore this! Huge smiles on this face and I am clapping hands with little squeaks on each perfect point you made in both scenarios! Love, love, love this!
Never ending warm fuzzies incoming across that frickin Atlantic!!!
xoxo Taryn
Never ending warm fuzzies incoming across that frickin Atlantic!!!
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:12am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
4th Dec 2017 10:31pm
Very beautiful David, and each point hits true ... As always, a pleasure to read you ...
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6th Dec 2017 00:14am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
4th Dec 2017 10:50pm
very...
Lovely
On point
Valuable
Efficient writing this is!
Well said dear david! :)
Respects
H
Lovely
On point
Valuable
Efficient writing this is!
Well said dear david! :)
Respects
H
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6th Dec 2017 00:16am
Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
5th Dec 2017 1:01am
Re: Re. What Love is and is not (an acrostic Poem)
6th Dec 2017 00:19am
coming from a poet of your stature that means so much to me - thank you :-)