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Enigmatic
To write give a poem.
A mind like on stars,
stars that's out of reach.
Deep and deeper than the depth
of the ocean.
Solving can only make you wonder,
because there is nothing that can be
understood rather just to assume.
For a moment it was a pleasure
taking you to dreams undreamt.
A mind like on stars,
stars that's out of reach.
Deep and deeper than the depth
of the ocean.
Solving can only make you wonder,
because there is nothing that can be
understood rather just to assume.
For a moment it was a pleasure
taking you to dreams undreamt.
Published 20th Nov 2017
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20th Nov 2017 11:45pm
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21st Nov 2017 12:13pm
21st Nov 2017 1:36pm
Very enigmatic, indeed and very well written! Your talent is unfolding!... Now, which of the following comes closer to its meaning?
She brought her hand to the side of her face / her thumb and two of her fingers wrapped softly around her ear lob / A gesture open to interpretation / Only her ear lob knew its true sensation...
When all your assumptions are proven to be wrong, keep assuming... Proof standards fluctuate...
She brought her hand to the side of her face / her thumb and two of her fingers wrapped softly around her ear lob / A gesture open to interpretation / Only her ear lob knew its true sensation...
When all your assumptions are proven to be wrong, keep assuming... Proof standards fluctuate...
21st Nov 2017 3:54pm
Good sir your words always leaves me wonderstruck !!! making me question more deeply the essence of it, yours is a conundrum mind filled with endless imagination .... thank you so much ...😊
21st Nov 2017 8:29pm
Just superficial, my friend, and shallow, away from the danger of drowning... And, you, still enigmatic and talented.
20th Jan 2019 4:03pm
