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Wishtending
New moon in Scorpio
our deep togetherness
tasting Universal silence
Wishtending upon Stars
fusing wishes and intention
into a receptive Cosmos:
a cocktail readily accepted
more than either by itself;
a nightcap of faith-borne
Belief transmitting dreams
~
For J, my Love 💜
and inspiration💫
. . . always
Image Julie Fletcher
our deep togetherness
tasting Universal silence
Wishtending upon Stars
fusing wishes and intention
into a receptive Cosmos:
a cocktail readily accepted
more than either by itself;
a nightcap of faith-borne
Belief transmitting dreams
~
For J, my Love 💜
and inspiration💫
. . . always
Image Julie Fletcher
Published 19th Nov 2017
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19th Nov 2017 4:03am
You do so lovingly wish the stars into alignment with such incantations Ahavati, I always enjoy seeing astrology so poetically expressed through your ink ❤️
Thank you, Gem. 🌌
It helps to have such a beautiful muse. 💑
I always enjoy your interpretations. ❤
It helps to have such a beautiful muse. 💑
I always enjoy your interpretations. ❤
19th Nov 2017 5:09am
19th Nov 2017 5:37am
Firstly, 💜.
Secondly, you created a new word !!!!!!!!!!! [nonsense]
Thirdly, you've beautifully captured what an amazing phenomena it is of two beings dreaming on behalf of their partner as well as their selves;
a recipe for Happiness concocted out of Love.
Fourthly, Lastly, and Again ..... 💜
Secondly, you created a new word !!!!!!!!!!! [nonsense]
Thirdly, you've beautifully captured what an amazing phenomena it is of two beings dreaming on behalf of their partner as well as their selves;
a recipe for Happiness concocted out of Love.
Fourthly, Lastly, and Again ..... 💜
19th Nov 2017 4:11pm
Anonymous
19th Nov 2017 9:03pm
The title, the poem. Beautiful.
19th Nov 2017 9:17pm
beautiful poem and I love the word wishtending - it's good that our poetic licence allows us to make up words with or without definition - you new word is splendorificanicular :-))
Big Huge Like - inspiring :-))))
Big Huge Like - inspiring :-))))
20th Nov 2017 2:39am
Well wrote......wish I could i'dentify wit thee perspective, but
wee silly nihilists just can't be there for any more than
a furtive glance.
wee silly nihilists just can't be there for any more than
a furtive glance.
21st Nov 2017 5:45pm
The moment when
the thought of one who holds
the keys to heart flashes through
your curious heart.
Well,talking of remembering the cordial and deep emotional feelings lurking under the shadows of your togetherness,the response of both party counts.
Just a piece...
Having such thoughts sharpens your emotion for the lucky guy...
But when the togetherness hurts,then it makes the emotions blunt.
Lovely words up there.
With respect,
Joshua.
the thought of one who holds
the keys to heart flashes through
your curious heart.
Well,talking of remembering the cordial and deep emotional feelings lurking under the shadows of your togetherness,the response of both party counts.
Just a piece...
Having such thoughts sharpens your emotion for the lucky guy...
But when the togetherness hurts,then it makes the emotions blunt.
Lovely words up there.
With respect,
Joshua.
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