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Where do broken hearts flow?
To release...
the hue of anguish,
true joy... a foreign
language
it seems...
Too many fall victim
to these seams of
wonder, what's under
the veil of feigned bravery...
It tires me, the delivery
of blood's shaded misery
To go on, when one's not
really strong, the will wilted
into shards of a self long
gone, the house of cards
played out like the tales
of Babylon, maybe before
I babble on, the tide will
turn...
To see, a sea churn
this chaotic heart
burn, anew
for the desire's
truth is found...
In the subtle
transition
of heart's hole
as it flows
straight into the soul...
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Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
2nd Nov 2017 5:57pm
profound inking
dear poet..
" To see, a sea churn
this chaotic heart
burn, anew
for the desire's
truth is found...
so beautiful when those truths
are revealed..
fantastic ink..
~Raven
dear poet..
" To see, a sea churn
this chaotic heart
burn, anew
for the desire's
truth is found...
so beautiful when those truths
are revealed..
fantastic ink..
~Raven
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2nd Nov 2017 6:05pm
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 6:12pm
This is beautiful dear sir. What a comforting piece.
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2nd Nov 2017 6:24pm
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Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
2nd Nov 2017 10:30pm
"To release...
the hue of anguish,
true joy... a foreign
language "
I really appreciate this line..
Such a sad and drastically beautified sorrow expressed in this...
I can agree with this...
Hope you'll feel well....
-H-
the hue of anguish,
true joy... a foreign
language "
I really appreciate this line..
Such a sad and drastically beautified sorrow expressed in this...
I can agree with this...
Hope you'll feel well....
-H-
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3rd Nov 2017 10:21am
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3rd Nov 2017 10:22am
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3rd Nov 2017 2:54pm
Apparently I'm not good at hiding huh? lol
Thank you my Dani...I appreciate you bunches :)
Thank you my Dani...I appreciate you bunches :)
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3rd Nov 2017 6:52pm
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Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
3rd Nov 2017 9:39pm
To go on, when one's not
really strong, the will wilted
into shards of a self long
gone, the house of cards
played out like the tales
of Babylon, maybe before
I babble on, the tide will
turn...
Though I am wounded
I am not slain
I shall lay me down to bleed
then rise to fight again
Beautiful verse, PoetikOne. Many are called but few chosen; the ones who endure.
really strong, the will wilted
into shards of a self long
gone, the house of cards
played out like the tales
of Babylon, maybe before
I babble on, the tide will
turn...
Though I am wounded
I am not slain
I shall lay me down to bleed
then rise to fight again
Beautiful verse, PoetikOne. Many are called but few chosen; the ones who endure.
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Re: Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
3rd Nov 2017 10:12pm
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
3rd Nov 2017 11:36pm
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3rd Nov 2017 11:51pm
Aaawww... but can I get that in dollars please? lol... thank you sweetheart, you're a gem... truly appreciated :)
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:06am
PM!!! A beautiful and breathtaking piece. The first stanza says it all and pulls one right into this profound ink...speaking truths regardless of the pains they may cause either party is a beautiful thing...it exposes vulnerability...a naked soul...and to have such trust with another which allows such an act is worth more than anything...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
4th Nov 2017 00:22am
Taryn...I'm honored by your praise...thank you so much, greatly appreciate you for the support. :)
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
4th Nov 2017 2:24am
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4th Nov 2017 8:59am
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
This is more than beautiful...I tried to decode your messages...."It tires me, the delivery of blood's shaded misery", "To go on, when one's not really strong...." , and "In the subtle transition of heart's hole as it flows straight into the soul... ". My conclusion is the inside power could help to defeat the misery caused by the outside world......
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
4th Nov 2017 3:09pm
Thank you sweetie...Well that's an outstanding conclusion...
Though as with most all my inks I tend to leave the interpretation up to the readers...
Truly truly adore yours n your support too :)
Though as with most all my inks I tend to leave the interpretation up to the readers...
Truly truly adore yours n your support too :)
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
5th Nov 2017 9:51pm
***** This amazing ink gets my masterpiece badge of brilliance P...a slow dance of wisdom and passion...loved it to bits.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
5th Nov 2017 10:03pm
Wow bro. That's extremely generous of you n I'm deeply flattered! Thanks a ton....
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7th Nov 2017 7:04pm
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7th Nov 2017 7:16pm
Thank you, that's very sweet of you to say... I'm grateful for your time n thoughts. :)
Re. Where do broken hearts flow?
23rd Nov 2017 1:06pm
Hi Poetik,
I adore this beautiful poem. It bleeds of genuine emotion and struggle, with a glimpse at hope.
Inspiring work : )
I adore this beautiful poem. It bleeds of genuine emotion and struggle, with a glimpse at hope.
Inspiring work : )
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23rd Nov 2017 4:34pm