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Final Hour (Haiku)
The wilted flower
Droops in a tragic sadness
Alas, final hour...
Droops in a tragic sadness
Alas, final hour...
Written by
anonymouslyhere
(Pariah Shadow)
Published 27th Oct 2017
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Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 7:39am
Re: Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 7:50am
Thank you, you're support is always greatly appreciated and humbling.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 7:44am
Re: Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 7:49am
Glad you thought so, certainly it was filled with a lot of personal emotions in a round about way. Thank you dearly for reading.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 8:11am
My friend... I'm glad this is right with mine which is an honor for me.
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Re: Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 8:37am
It's an honor to have you stop by, you're piece was the best I've read on here in a while, it was outstanding. Thank you for the read.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
27th Oct 2017 2:43pm
If they all came short in length, this would be the realest I've ever read.!!
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Re: Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
28th Oct 2017 10:32am
Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
Anonymous
28th Oct 2017 2:52am
I see my life as this. I think that the simplicity of this poem is perfect.
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Re: Re. Final Hour (Haiku)
28th Oct 2017 10:35am
I'm glad you really you felt it. It is indeed simple and based on my life in a way. Appreciate you stopping by.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow