Step Off

She peeks cautiously around the corner...
Fierce write here, my friend. I don't know who set off your rage-o-meter but I sure hope it wasn't me! Sending hugs and more hugs...and even more hugs!

how could it ever be you? - there were reasons for the write sadly but comes under the heading 'shit happens' can always use that many hugs:-) Loads of big huge HUGS! :-)

smack down poetry
at its finest
damn write whoever inspired this
better take warning & step off.

pure ferocity..

love & hugs Brenda

I'll be honest with you he can step off or not I don't care what choices he makes I have no fear - even in my chair I could still take him (lol) I am for hire and I work cheap :-) - Huge Massive Hugs :-)

I could imagine a rap while I recite.

I am too old to rap (lol) thank you, glad you enjoyed :-)

David my friend...whoever stepped into your comfort zone and caused such distribution to your chi is insane....fucking with a Highlander is a most erroneous move...excellent vent and each word is felt with the most intensity...breathe my friend...a fairy is sitting on your shoulder and is holding on tight!

Xoxo Taryn

I am normally the calm and collected one you could even poke me with a stick and call me a cunt and get no response. but some things are beyond the pale - any man who strikes a woman deserves payback - I used to box, I don't need legs to kick the shit out of somebody - anyway I am calm now :-) thank you - huge big hugs :-)

fucking love!  my kinda write seeing as Im full of either rage or shit these days. lol. hugs <3

Gggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :-) we have that in common :-)  thank you :-))))

Obscenely engaging rage my friend! Lol this was a trip.. beautifully crafted speech here sir! An irritation at first... this piece breaks open and builds and boils over and... mic drop! :)

well you got it I was going for annoying and a mic drop moment :-) thank you so much my friend :-) Hugssssssss :-)

David, without any doubt, what so ever, you are definitely a mighty force to be reckoned with...approaching very slowly...and with extreme caution!

My friend, as with most of your more personal  penings, something extremely  intense, or unjust, has to occur, in order to send you into such a fit of rage!  And the seething, red-hot fury of your anger is so clearly felt throughout this entire piece! The person that caused your inner-beast to be released, had better be searching for an immediate escape--to be certain!
( see your fingers...see your thumbs....see your fists...he/she better run!!! ) (lol)

This piece packs a powerful punch-- both symbolically, and, quite possibly, literally--if this person is foolish enough to continually fuck with your fierce Scottish ire!  Inhale (deeply) : 1..2..3...Exhale (slowly) : 1..2...3....and repeat-- while enfold you in tight, calming hugs..... :)

no, I am a pussy cat really - it was inspire by my wife being assaulted by a shop keeper and it takes something as serious as that to bring the rage to the surface :-) I am trying those breathing tasks as we speak - every time I think about it it bubbles back up :-(# As always thank you for your kind words and understanding :-) Huge Big Hugs :-)))))))))

Breathing slowly - there's no place like home, there's no place like home, there's no place like home (LOL) thank you for your kind comments :-) Hugs :-)