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Prosperity Gospel - Hell's Hospital
Doggie bag dogmas
stowed beneath
the bottom of our holes;
so hallowed
Stashed saccharine precepts
packet philosophies
packed into pockets
forsaken in musted jackets
Following fallow fineries
sparing our lids the sense of peeling
refining our trending
blindness;
lest we all but freeze
stowed beneath
the bottom of our holes;
so hallowed
Stashed saccharine precepts
packet philosophies
packed into pockets
forsaken in musted jackets
Following fallow fineries
sparing our lids the sense of peeling
refining our trending
blindness;
lest we all but freeze
Published 9th Oct 2017
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What a great write to the substitute of genuineness, AtoMikOne. You nailed the hypocrisy.
Stashed saccharine precepts
Saccharine is not only a sweetened substitute, but a dangerous health gazed.
Excellent double-entendre!
Stashed saccharine precepts
Saccharine is not only a sweetened substitute, but a dangerous health gazed.
Excellent double-entendre!
9th Oct 2017 11:27pm
10th Oct 2017 3:31am
another wonderful opera of words - when I grow up I want to write like you :-)))))
"Following fallow fineries
sparing our lids the sense of peeling" - this one got me thinking of the bad experiences I've had - this write went some way to soothing them - thank you :-)
"Following fallow fineries
sparing our lids the sense of peeling" - this one got me thinking of the bad experiences I've had - this write went some way to soothing them - thank you :-)
10th Oct 2017 4:05am
Thank you David! If it weren't for writing I'm not sure how I would process things.
10th Oct 2017 4:19am
10th Oct 2017 3:42pm
vocabulary on point, strong flow, deep meaning... dope af as the kids would say.
respect.
respect.
10th Oct 2017 3:49pm
Haha!! I'm quite fond of saying "AF" lately, it rolls off the tongue well and the emphasis is great 😆 Thank you so much!
