siren's song

My love....such an intoxicating spill, how it flows through my veins leaving beads of salt left to be licked off my lips...you as well sing the most beautiful melodies in my ears and have brought me out of the darkened deep waters I swim in when I’ve been drowning in them...there is no thought more peaceful for me than to be lying in a field with you, your face greeting me with the most beautiful smile highlighted by daisy crowned locks...pure bliss...I am so blessed...

I love you so deeply...words just simply can’t express...

yours always & forever
Xoxo Taryn

thank you my love it's how you make me feel beautiful one.. carried away on a dream is loving you.. I am so happy I do the same for you.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda

So elegant, so sweet, so soothing.  The words you ink are a siren’s song drawing me in.  You have a way about you that is for sure.

Thank you for the write.

thank you dearest Wolfe for such a beautiful comment causing me to beam :) you have a way about you too.. love Crim

A beautiful, calming spill of dreaminess...
Very nicely composed! :)

thank you dearest Poe i'm so happy you felt the feeling I was trying to convey.. love Crim

We all need that hope

thank you Tim yes indeed we do.. love Brenda

such a beautiful tribute and I hope this is true for you - you deserve the best of things :-)

Huge Like - Huge hugs :-)

thank you dearest David yes our beautiful one gives me rays of hope to light my way.. love & hugs Brenda

Beautiful one, your words here are some of the most beautiful I've yet seen you grace the page with. The love and longing woven through every line is exquisite. I saw you and your love running through those tall graces with the most beautiful of smiles and laughter. I do so love you

thank you lovely one for such a beautiful & gracious comment I am glowing :) love you lady.. Crim

Just the message of hope I need for a Monday.  You realize the importance of one true friend to guide you, a siren more benign than most.  Maybe I'll hear her sing as well if I pay attention.  Excellent and moving write Lady Crim.

thank you dearest Sir Crow I am so happy to bring you hope on this day our muse is such a blessed thing.. love Crim

thank you beautiful Daniella for such a beautiful comment I couldn't hope for a better response from such a talented poetess & lovely soul such as you.. I am positively glowing :) love Brenda

Wonderful dreaming. Awesome poetry 😁

thank you for feeling the vibe of this poem.. love Crim

Lady crim, you have such a way of capturing the sweetest parts of love. My heart aches to know such a taste. Does this really exist, or it romance?

thank you graciously lovely Nightbird for such a gorgeous comment.. this poem was inspired by a deep love indeed :) I believe you will come to know this type of love in your near future.. love Crim

Many hugs <3

hugs you back beautiful :)

Brenda.. words are useless here.. this is the most powerful poem i've ever read.. you are the true poetess of DU.. i simply bow.. love you sister..










































Dave

thank you dearest Dave my brother I'm humbled by your gracious comment.. love you.. Brenda