Twisted Highway

Somber write, really resonated at the moment. Heartfelt piece, Grace.







~anonshadow

Thank you so much for reading this humble poem :)anonshadow. You are appreciated.

Melancholy but exceptional work Grace.  Such longing in those last three lines.  I loved the write, and the layout.  Fine job!

Thank you dear Crowfly. Your comments are always so encouraging.

we feel what we feel... that is the harsh reality.
no advice will ever comfort a broken heart, that is my belief, and so i'd offer none.
just know, that a stranger me from across country... knows and feels that sadness, and here let me share a bit of the burden...

(picture me crossed eyed smiling with mint leaves between my teeth offering a hug)

Hugs, minty breath!:) Oxy...kind of you to say that and ready my poem.

This is heart aching Grace. I love how your writes are so pure, so free of pretensions. The melody is effortless. It is a slow, somber river of the heart. Well done.  

Always kind in your comments:) dear Daniel. Thank you!

Oh grace!!! i can't  bear the thought of it.. i merely cover my eyes, ears and heart.

this is wonderfully beautiful and disturbing❤

Hi Spiltsunsets, thank you for reading me as always...:) yes I feel you ... you understood it.

Ohh my.. the ache and beauty of the visual... open, in it's perfect brevity...gorgeously worded and to me, the perfect sense of love, longing, pain and exquisite truth. Honesty that flows free and true....  

Some of my favorite, that I've read...
Ty for bumping it, Grace  
Stellar ink.  
🌹-💙
xo
B

Thanks dear B.  You know, we used to laugh about bumping writes. But I do bump my own poems now and then, especially when I am in the mood to say 'see mee see mee...' haha! This write was a time after our hiatus from each other. Bitter sweet memories. I wish he is around still...you know, miss that ..'hey do you remember...' or 'did you know....' sort of conversations.
sigh.
Thanks for being here, B:) hugs!