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My head is a bomb
My eyes puffy and red
I never imagined it would end
His lyrics kissed me gingerly
Got me through the pain
Traveling back roads alone in the rain
His voice danced on my flesh
My soul would beat with his heartbreakers
A true storytelling music maker
Sharing his gift with the world
Leaving us far too soon
Look up, he'll be rocking on the moon
My eyes puffy and red
I never imagined it would end
His lyrics kissed me gingerly
Got me through the pain
Traveling back roads alone in the rain
His voice danced on my flesh
My soul would beat with his heartbreakers
A true storytelling music maker
Sharing his gift with the world
Leaving us far too soon
Look up, he'll be rocking on the moon
Published 3rd Oct 2017
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3rd Oct 2017 3:03pm
3rd Oct 2017 10:42pm
3rd Oct 2017 5:41pm
Is it someone who was in the news? Even if not, good tribute if you had found his words helpful.
3rd Oct 2017 10:44pm
3rd Oct 2017 8:47pm
Tommie, your poem prompted me to look at the news and I am truly heartbroken by his death. I'm going up stairs, shut the door, and rock to "Hard Promises."
This stanza is so beautiful in its sincerity and imagery:
"His lyrics kissed me gingerly
Got me through the pain
Traveling back roads alone in the rain"
Bravisima mia bella amica!
This stanza is so beautiful in its sincerity and imagery:
"His lyrics kissed me gingerly
Got me through the pain
Traveling back roads alone in the rain"
Bravisima mia bella amica!
3rd Oct 2017 10:46pm
I'm crushed by his untimely death. Jam on GW, we'll always have his music! Thank you.
4th Oct 2017 4:23am
That's the awesone beauty of music, poetry, and art in general it's timeless.
3rd Oct 2017 11:27pm
7th Oct 2017 1:38pm
7th Oct 2017 1:39pm
4th Oct 2017 9:18pm
Petty was one of my favorites and I miss him already. He was a songwriter, and poet. I read the lyrics to "Free Falling" and I'm blown away. "The vampires turn left down Ventura Boulevard." Wow! This is a fine tribute to one of rock's true artists. Thank you Tommie Lynn!
7th Oct 2017 1:40pm
4th Oct 2017 9:20pm
aw Tommie this is a soulful & heartbreaking tribute
to one beautiful person & musician..
may he be running down a dream today..
love & hugs Brenda
to one beautiful person & musician..
may he be running down a dream today..
love & hugs Brenda
7th Oct 2017 1:41pm
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