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Cat Haikus 7.1
(i) Sleep
such a sleepy puss
slumbers comfy in his fur
the cats in the cradle
(ii) No
says no to hard drugs
kitty is high on cat nip
a mellow feline
(iii) Holiday
hotel for pussies
Vacationing kitty catz
the Ritz cattery
(iv) Singer
a meower of songs
warmly furry folk ballad
he’s my Cat, Stevens
(v) Hot Pussy
pussy is too warm
a cat on a hot tin roof
she retreats inside
(vi) Clean
mucky Tiddles cat
gives herself a tongue bath
wish I could do that
(vii) Meow!
fireside comfort nap
that rug in front of the fire
is not a rug - "Meow!"
such a sleepy puss
slumbers comfy in his fur
the cats in the cradle
(ii) No
says no to hard drugs
kitty is high on cat nip
a mellow feline
(iii) Holiday
hotel for pussies
Vacationing kitty catz
the Ritz cattery
(iv) Singer
a meower of songs
warmly furry folk ballad
he’s my Cat, Stevens
(v) Hot Pussy
pussy is too warm
a cat on a hot tin roof
she retreats inside
(vi) Clean
mucky Tiddles cat
gives herself a tongue bath
wish I could do that
(vii) Meow!
fireside comfort nap
that rug in front of the fire
is not a rug - "Meow!"
Published 23rd Sep 2017
| Edited 24th Sep 2017
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23rd Sep 2017 1:15am
24th Sep 2017 8:36pm
23rd Sep 2017 1:20am
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23rd Sep 2017 2:11am
Awwww these ones were so cuuuute! Why is my cat outside? I want to pet her now. haha. Cat-tastic!
24th Sep 2017 8:37pm
23rd Sep 2017 3:24am
CATfun CATchphrases
CATptivatingly CATchy
CATcalling CATtle
That was hard, not purrfect, but I tried.
Love these.
Thank you for the write.
CATptivatingly CATchy
CATcalling CATtle
That was hard, not purrfect, but I tried.
Love these.
Thank you for the write.
24th Sep 2017 8:38pm
I feel like I have been punned to death (lol) what a way to go :-) thank you sir, glad you enjoyed :-)
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2017 4:38am
More kitties!! I love it! Always delivered with the signature David humorous subtlety. My cat will now suffer hugs in your honor! Hugs for you incoming! ☺
24th Sep 2017 8:42pm
it's good to hugggggg kitties :-) glad you and kitty enjoyed :-) Big Huge Hugs :-)
23rd Sep 2017 5:15am
24th Sep 2017 8:39pm
23rd Sep 2017 5:41pm
Hey luv your cat haiku. The imagery is Cattastic lol. and Catching. Bravo Poet.
24th Sep 2017 8:40pm
more cat puns please :-) I am almost catatonic :-) Thank you, glad you liked :-)
23rd Sep 2017 6:52pm
David....i simply adore your these Kitty Haiku! As i have mentioned, with your previous Cat Haiku, you have a way of depicting these feline scenarios with such realism, and the way you weave your wonderful humor within them, create pieces that are a delight to read!
If only i could purr with pleasure......
Warm...soft....snuggly....cuddly hugs to you---from my 'fur-person', and i !
If only i could purr with pleasure......
Warm...soft....snuggly....cuddly hugs to you---from my 'fur-person', and i !
24th Sep 2017 8:43pm
I am always happier when I know you've enjoyed my writes :-) 1000 Purrrrring hugs coming to you :-)
24th Sep 2017 7:00pm
a meower of songs
warmly furry folk ballad
he’s my Cat, Stevens
Of you remove the second a and alter tenses to warmly to compensate for the syllable, you would also capitalize on the consonance of l.
fireside comfort
that rug in front of the fire
is not a rug - "Meow!"
You'd lose a "the" in L2 with "that", and also enhance the consonance of 't' throughout.
I particularly enjoyed the references in each, e.g. - cats in the cradle, Cat, Stevens,
cat on a hot tin roof. Very clever, David. Your imagination is boundless.
warmly furry folk ballad
he’s my Cat, Stevens
Of you remove the second a and alter tenses to warmly to compensate for the syllable, you would also capitalize on the consonance of l.
fireside comfort
that rug in front of the fire
is not a rug - "Meow!"
You'd lose a "the" in L2 with "that", and also enhance the consonance of 't' throughout.
I particularly enjoyed the references in each, e.g. - cats in the cradle, Cat, Stevens,
cat on a hot tin roof. Very clever, David. Your imagination is boundless.
24th Sep 2017 8:50pm
these are the critiques that I really enjoy and I have adopted your ideas :-) thank you so much :-)
