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Mirror Mistress
Silver trails when the muzak starts
Tears shed as the train departs
She will miss him and his strictest ways
The satisfaction of their better days
She might prevail, stepping tall
She might fail, a graceful fall
Her own Mistress in the mirror
Assuring her there's naught to fear.
Tears shed as the train departs
She will miss him and his strictest ways
The satisfaction of their better days
She might prevail, stepping tall
She might fail, a graceful fall
Her own Mistress in the mirror
Assuring her there's naught to fear.
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Re. Mirror Mistress
18th Aug 2017 11:40pm
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20th Aug 2017 8:02pm
Re. Mirror Mistress
18th Aug 2017 11:43pm
Captured me with the essence of self-doubt. I can relate to this piece. I'm sure many others, men and women, can too.
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20th Aug 2017 8:03pm
Re. Mirror Mistress
19th Aug 2017 4:31am
Hey Crow......stunning ink.....powerful for few words.....luv the pic......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Mirror Mistress
20th Aug 2017 8:05pm
I should probably flesh these out a bit more, not so bare bones. Thank you Flower!
Re. Mirror Mistress
19th Aug 2017 6:32am
Sometimes the mirror tells you more than you want to know:) it catches every nuance of your face. Good read, Crowfly.
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20th Aug 2017 8:06pm
Thanks Grace. I tell the mirror to just shut it when I'm shaving. No respect at all....
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21st Aug 2017 12:25pm
:) and so you should, Crowfly...although I bet you are much better looking personally.
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Re. Mirror Mistress
19th Aug 2017 8:15am
romance of a train station;
silver trails - tears reflecting the rain.
she does it right...
silver trails - tears reflecting the rain.
she does it right...
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20th Aug 2017 8:07pm
Re. Mirror Mistress
19th Aug 2017 8:31am
the use of muzak made me think of change room mirrors ltm bloody things are the bane of my existence
great write, mister
xo
great write, mister
xo
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Re: Re. Mirror Mistress
20th Aug 2017 8:11pm
Be nice to hit the control room and put on some Rammstein. Just a thought. Thank you Katja!
Re. Mirror Mistress
19th Aug 2017 2:18pm
Awesome ! 😎🎈🌞🌷
This made me think about "mirror... mirror... on the wall, who's the fairest of them all ?" 😮😜🤐🤓
This made me think about "mirror... mirror... on the wall, who's the fairest of them all ?" 😮😜🤐🤓
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20th Aug 2017 8:12pm
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2017 00:11am
My Lovely SIr Crow, mirrors....I avoid them at all costs for some many reasons...too many brutal truths reflected in my eyes to be seen...ignorance is bliss when all which is seen is to be feared...I hope the Mistress in this case is right...love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo

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20th Aug 2017 8:13pm