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the feeling in the beginning..

ur eeyes are like the sun to me
ur lips are like sweet lusicous candy
your smile always makes my day,
ur kisses always make me sway.

wen i hear ur voice my pain mellts away
wen u tel me u love me my heart floats away
away to a place unlike here.
a place where i dont need to live in fear< 3

now i give u my heart
in hopes u  will take it
nd keep it forver
nd if u dont take it
then i  will never make it
il never make it in this cruel world.
where people hate nd spit on love
but as long as i have u with me
those fears  jus fade away like dust

our lust for each other is so amazing.
makes me feel like im in heaven
even tho we jus in the bed and
making love like theres no tomorrow
theres no more time for hurt n sorrow

as i sit here n write to u
i feel my body split into
millions pieces that float away.
and go with the wind that brings no grey...
Written by undead_carolina
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