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EROTIC HIGH
As i reach
the top of the mountain
I just realize
there are no female pussy
that could really satisfied me
look up deep in the sky
OH God Why
i just want to fucking cry
Should i just jerk off
Make the tip top of this mountain
very slimy sticky
From my wasted sperm
Make a Full u-turn
Go Home alone and start jerking (off)
Just like
Macaulay Culkin
Published 5th Jul 2017
| Edited 6th Jul 2017
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5th Jul 2017 11:25pm
6th Jul 2017 2:18am
i hate your poem ..its badly written...dont get upset just get better
Aside from its flat line lack of enchantment the content tells me you don't have clue about women...So your prayin to God...So hes comin through me hard and strong
and heres what he wants you to know...there are many different kinds of women...some are delicious whores who will do you right in bed but if you don't treat them like gifts because they are you'll be jerken your bird 4 ever ...they love a hot fuck and they are the best...they are distinguished by knowing the pleasure of men ...then there are the others ...most of them are as confused as hell and want direction not in the sense of a tyrant but in the sense of confidence and direction from a strong loving man with an evolved eroticism ...That is more advanced then just the all American wham bam what ever the fuck stuff youve figured out....Be fearless and cultivate grace...bring out the flowers of their souls because most of them at your age ant got a fuckin clue either and are ditzy beginners..... except they are lookin and they cant admit to themselves how desperate they really are ...they lie to themselves trying to hold on to there false sense of dignity...they are deluded lookin for perfect and when they finally nail it they are almost always disillusioned ...When you understand that deeply and you aren't afraid of rejection you will have love galore...Also dont always fixate on the one you like ...look around and see who likes you...very pretty girls may use there looks as a weapon for power...Sex is partly about power..not necessarily overt though but about knowing that you have something women want...Dont mean to you have hurt your feelings but your poem is a cry for help ...hope you an accept it...Words are difficult they point to something but what thing is a feeling of power so when you look into the eyes of a woman she feels your power ...your manhood ...and she gets excited to her core ...and then you can feel her passion and she will fuck you cross eyed
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Aside from its flat line lack of enchantment the content tells me you don't have clue about women...So your prayin to God...So hes comin through me hard and strong
and heres what he wants you to know...there are many different kinds of women...some are delicious whores who will do you right in bed but if you don't treat them like gifts because they are you'll be jerken your bird 4 ever ...they love a hot fuck and they are the best...they are distinguished by knowing the pleasure of men ...then there are the others ...most of them are as confused as hell and want direction not in the sense of a tyrant but in the sense of confidence and direction from a strong loving man with an evolved eroticism ...That is more advanced then just the all American wham bam what ever the fuck stuff youve figured out....Be fearless and cultivate grace...bring out the flowers of their souls because most of them at your age ant got a fuckin clue either and are ditzy beginners..... except they are lookin and they cant admit to themselves how desperate they really are ...they lie to themselves trying to hold on to there false sense of dignity...they are deluded lookin for perfect and when they finally nail it they are almost always disillusioned ...When you understand that deeply and you aren't afraid of rejection you will have love galore...Also dont always fixate on the one you like ...look around and see who likes you...very pretty girls may use there looks as a weapon for power...Sex is partly about power..not necessarily overt though but about knowing that you have something women want...Dont mean to you have hurt your feelings but your poem is a cry for help ...hope you an accept it...Words are difficult they point to something but what thing is a feeling of power so when you look into the eyes of a woman she feels your power ...your manhood ...and she gets excited to her core ...and then you can feel her passion and she will fuck you cross eyed
YOUR WELCOME
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All my poetry is fiction Well thanks for reading my fiction erotic poetry
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Lmao.
Did you just right me a book comment
All my poetry is fiction Well thanks for reading my fiction erotic poetry
Wow I just got under somebody skin
Lmao.
