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Proverbial Blowback
a million
chameleons
blend into
the background
fading to black
inside the
echo chamber
filled with
{righteous} anger
indistinguishable
unoriginal
incognizant of
the danger of
group think
....
know
the history
before engaging
remember
the pendulum swings
back and forth
truth can be
a scathing thing
sometimes
as sharp as a knife
you won't know
you've been cut
until you feel the coldness
of karma's blood
dripping
down your
soul
...
Published 1st Jul 2017
| Edited 20th Jul 2018
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1st Jul 2017 12:20pm
know
the history
before engaging
That right there is so imperative . . .
People just don't know. Nice metaphor, Naajir.
the history
before engaging
That right there is so imperative . . .
People just don't know. Nice metaphor, Naajir.
1st Jul 2017 1:04pm
"Karma's blood dripping down your soul"
indeed Naajir it surely does
powerful write..
love Crim
indeed Naajir it surely does
powerful write..
love Crim
Anonymous
1st Jul 2017 3:50pm
I think we're too easily caught up in the collective voices led by those with an agenda. We forget to think for ourselves or question where it all started. Your words are almost prophetic in their cadence and absolutely true in their message.
1st Jul 2017 4:03pm
"the pendulum swings
back and forth
truth can be
a scathing thing"
Love this phrase. Very good!
back and forth
truth can be
a scathing thing"
Love this phrase. Very good!
Anonymous
1st Jul 2017 4:40pm
Naaj, the easiest thing for me to do is highlight every line of this...I am in love with every one of them...period...each one brings minds to ponder their truths...provoking ink my friend!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
