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what it all means
She doesn't chew her food
making sucking, slurping sounds
smacking as she maws her meat,
dribbling, drooling
as he's jammed between her slack lips
connected by a string of
his and hers
ejaculate
Reddish purple veiny member
rudely fashioned out of
skin, vessels, cartilage
jabbing at her frantically
overrun with spasms
until he spits
out his unseeing one eye
then, once he is finally empty,
flaccidly resting on
a hip
her hairy orifice
covered in mucous and semen
tensing, releasing as if breathing
drooling what's left of her dinner
down her inner thigh
every sophistication
detail of etiquette
complex thought, concept
altruistic action
that defines
elevation of humanity
defers innately to
this primitive concept
this exercise in the grotesque
and the power it has over us
with all of our wisdom
developments, hypotheses
breakthroughs, cures
it all remains the same
as it did millions of years ago:
the meaning of life
is "fuck."
making sucking, slurping sounds
smacking as she maws her meat,
dribbling, drooling
as he's jammed between her slack lips
connected by a string of
his and hers
ejaculate
Reddish purple veiny member
rudely fashioned out of
skin, vessels, cartilage
jabbing at her frantically
overrun with spasms
until he spits
out his unseeing one eye
then, once he is finally empty,
flaccidly resting on
a hip
her hairy orifice
covered in mucous and semen
tensing, releasing as if breathing
drooling what's left of her dinner
down her inner thigh
every sophistication
detail of etiquette
complex thought, concept
altruistic action
that defines
elevation of humanity
defers innately to
this primitive concept
this exercise in the grotesque
and the power it has over us
with all of our wisdom
developments, hypotheses
breakthroughs, cures
it all remains the same
as it did millions of years ago:
the meaning of life
is "fuck."
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good lordy
31st Aug 2011 11:07pm
I can not put together a comment to express myself here at all....that's a first.
oh, the last paragraph....powerful. The point of it all...the last lines...powerful.
I salute you and this, your very pointed message, and for your ability to get to the marrow..
powerful!
oh, the last paragraph....powerful. The point of it all...the last lines...powerful.
I salute you and this, your very pointed message, and for your ability to get to the marrow..
powerful!
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re: good lordy
31st Aug 2011 11:12pm
thank you-- it's not really erotic; I know. I've been experimenting with sex in language lately and this is part of that whole thing.
I'm grateful and thankful for your exhuberant response!
I'm grateful and thankful for your exhuberant response!
Re: The Meaning....
Anonymous
31st Aug 2011 11:11pm
beautiful_accident,
Wow! You cut right through the gravy and headed straight for the meat on this one. And a great job you did! One of my favorite lines:
" drooling what's left of her dinner
down her inner thigh"
...and I can't really say why???
Enjoyed the read...but now I have to go take a very hot shower...
tornado
Wow! You cut right through the gravy and headed straight for the meat on this one. And a great job you did! One of my favorite lines:
" drooling what's left of her dinner
down her inner thigh"
...and I can't really say why???
Enjoyed the read...but now I have to go take a very hot shower...
tornado
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re: Re: The Meaning....
31st Aug 2011 11:14pm
I tried to cut all the eroticism out of sex and just go right to the primeval function of it-- its ugliness, its primitivity, just the carnal facets... I'm glad you liked it! I figured it would either be a 'love' or 'hate' thing.
Anyways..I'm long-winded. Thanks for stopping by!
Anyways..I'm long-winded. Thanks for stopping by!
re: Re: The Meaning....
31st Aug 2011 11:16pm
re: re: Re: The Meaning....
Anonymous
1st Sep 2011 2:59pm
LOL!!! Touché beautiful_accident ; )
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wow
Anonymous
1st Sep 2011 2:45pm
you leave me impressed thinking ouside the box, you did an amazing job here!
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re: wow
1st Sep 2011 10:51pm
Defining life and its creaters
3rd Sep 2011 8:42am
You have managed to answer the three most important questions of the universe, the meaning of life... and what to call a penis and a vagina that don't sound clinical and yet could be said on TV.
1: fuck
2: unseeing one eye
3: hairy orifice
I now know that I will be at eternal peace even after my piece is deceased.
Great poem, I enjoyed every scrumpcious line of it.
Something tells me you're no accident!
1: fuck
2: unseeing one eye
3: hairy orifice
I now know that I will be at eternal peace even after my piece is deceased.
Great poem, I enjoyed every scrumpcious line of it.
Something tells me you're no accident!
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re: Defining life and its creaters
3rd Sep 2011 2:05pm
Thanks pm! I'm glad I could answer the questions that were burning the brightest in your mind!
And the accident thing? Sometimes I have my days...
And the accident thing? Sometimes I have my days...
wow!!!!!!!
7th Sep 2011 5:42pm
Just wow. For a work to be void of eroticism, this was way over the top erotic and extremely visual. Cold shower? I've been inspired to private time by these words. How have I missed your writing thus far? smh
Xcellent
Xcellent
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re: wow!!!!!!!
7th Sep 2011 7:46pm
Thank you. I hope you enjoyed your private time and wiped off the keyboard ;). Cheers!
Thought provoking
30th Nov 2011 7:23pm
This piece conjures up all the ways we are similar to other living creatures! I read the first three lines and thought "spider"! Darwin would be proud.
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re: Thought provoking
2nd Dec 2011 3:44am
Re: what it all means
21st Jan 2014 7:50pm
the meaning of life
is "fuck.
exactly
that's what i tell all
fuck all c
omposed a poem too
life is meant for a fuck for all
not few
is "fuck.
exactly
that's what i tell all
fuck all c
omposed a poem too
life is meant for a fuck for all
not few
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Re. what it all means
2nd Feb 2019 5:36pm