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Flesh eating bitch
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8sDp65dyeA
wait till u hear Dre start rapin, Natural born killaz
listen and read please ty.
I was floored to have
another bite taken
from my flesh.
What more do you need
that you don't already
have?
She answered;
I won't be happy till
I knock you down,
taking all your
happy endings with me.
To which I replied;
All your accolades that cascade
down each page doesn't change
the fact that you are, always have
been, and always will be,
a dirty cunt surrounded and bound to
your disgusting cuss of
a bitch personality!
Three Word Inspiration
surrounded, cascade, knock
wait till u hear Dre start rapin, Natural born killaz
listen and read please ty.
I was floored to have
another bite taken
from my flesh.
What more do you need
that you don't already
have?
She answered;
I won't be happy till
I knock you down,
taking all your
happy endings with me.
To which I replied;
All your accolades that cascade
down each page doesn't change
the fact that you are, always have
been, and always will be,
a dirty cunt surrounded and bound to
your disgusting cuss of
a bitch personality!
Three Word Inspiration
surrounded, cascade, knock
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 9th Jun 2017
| Edited 11th Jan 2021
Author's Note
You know it’s remarkable people that hate you want what you have and will go to any length to get it. I guess some people aren’t happy until they make other people suffer .
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 5:18am
Beautiful write Zazz. Your use of "A" alliteration is not lost here. And such a fun finale.
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Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 11:10am
beautiful Jackie absolutely fierce & fabulous write!!!
love you lady..
xo Brenda
love you lady..
xo Brenda
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Re: Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 2:24pm
Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 11:36am
Home run with the bases loaded kinda ink
You'll always be my Bronx bitch with a sensual twist
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You'll always be my Bronx bitch with a sensual twist
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Re: Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 2:25pm
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9th Jun 2017 2:26pm
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9th Jun 2017 1:16pm
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9th Jun 2017 2:27pm
Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 2:43pm
omgawd Zazzy, this is almost palpable! Imma need to sleep with the nightlight on now, lol!
~Jadey xo
~Jadey xo
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Re: Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 7:08pm
Re. Flesh eating bitch
Anonymous
9th Jun 2017 8:40pm
:-o <--that's me Zazzy babe, bahahahaaa!
your'e so talented and brainy, hugs, i needed
this laugh, its been a hellish momentarily day
your'e so talented and brainy, hugs, i needed
this laugh, its been a hellish momentarily day
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Re: Re. Flesh eating bitch
10th Jun 2017 2:25am
hahha yeah some people never learn.. glad to see you have a great night Sun Xo Zazzles
Re. Flesh eating bitch
9th Jun 2017 8:46pm
You extrapolate so much from three measly words! I love the conversational format, and the ferocity. I've got a pound of flesh around here somewhere.....
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Re: Re. Flesh eating bitch
10th Jun 2017 2:24am
Hi Crow, it's funny how that works :) Glad your enjoying my writes! (((((((((((((((((((Crow))))))))))))))))))) Thank you for the list...Xo Love Zazzles
Re. Flesh eating bitch
10th Jun 2017 2:31am
Oh yeah... I love me some bitchy poems!
I had to figure out where this came from (still finding my way around the forums and the endless comps)
Awesome use of those three words and I love that you provide a youtube link with your poetry... all my poems come with a youtube link and most benefit from reading with the music on the background... I think you're the first I met here who does that as well :-)
Love and hugs, Duende
I had to figure out where this came from (still finding my way around the forums and the endless comps)
Awesome use of those three words and I love that you provide a youtube link with your poetry... all my poems come with a youtube link and most benefit from reading with the music on the background... I think you're the first I met here who does that as well :-)
Love and hugs, Duende
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10th Jun 2017 2:37am
I cannot write without music Duende yes i don't care for biters! just having fun with my all time favorite writing game(Tool) it never fails me 99.9% of the time. glad you enjoyed true story btw hahaha Hugssss Jackie xo
Re. Flesh eating bitch
11th Jun 2017 7:35pm
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11th Jun 2017 8:29pm