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Sweet Poetry: 'An Apparition in the Seams of Mind'
I can feel her...
crawlin'
devastatingly slow
coursin' thru
the marrow
bone deep...
lost, my options
for sleep...
Though
I've never seen
her, I SEE her...
this harrowin'
heroine burrowed,
hurtlin' highest heights
of my shattered psyche
could be, she shredded
this blur-re-read
the linin' of thin veil
But, for God
how can this be real?
It seems so clear,
this reveal...
Yet, will
the mass,
unmask,
peel...per my appeal?
Within a few swift
'minute' lapses in time
a mind 'drunk' of mine
n' spilt sweet wine, the
exasperations so kind...
A thief of the night, slit
the seal of a soul bound-
bonded- tight...
n' I sense
a warmth,
a sliver of light...
crawlin'
devastatingly slow
coursin' thru
the marrow
bone deep...
lost, my options
for sleep...
Though
I've never seen
her, I SEE her...
this harrowin'
heroine burrowed,
hurtlin' highest heights
of my shattered psyche
could be, she shredded
this blur-re-read
the linin' of thin veil
But, for God
how can this be real?
It seems so clear,
this reveal...
Yet, will
the mass,
unmask,
peel...per my appeal?
Within a few swift
'minute' lapses in time
a mind 'drunk' of mine
n' spilt sweet wine, the
exasperations so kind...
A thief of the night, slit
the seal of a soul bound-
bonded- tight...
n' I sense
a warmth,
a sliver of light...
Published 25th May 2017
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25th May 2017 1:44pm
Ah! Your heart's been cracked! It's how the light gets in, PoetikOne!
That first stanza rocks the cashbah of DUP!
That first stanza rocks the cashbah of DUP!
25th May 2017 2:26pm
AAAWWW...my beautiful friend, truly, deeply touched by your praise...grateful always for you n your support :)
Anonymous
25th May 2017 2:52pm
These are some deeply tender lines your sweet pen has spread here. A bit like a gentle hug. Beautiful write, absolutely beautiful
25th May 2017 2:57pm
Aaaaawww... your comment sure as heck felt like a big gentle hug! Thank you Ash...deeply grateful for your support always :)
25th May 2017 8:08pm
25th May 2017 9:43pm
Tru dat, the soul does indeed...thank you so much my dear sweet Lyrical One... :)
26th May 2017 5:19pm
27th May 2017 2:54pm
Aaaaawww...dear sweet Lana...you are so wonderful...thank you so much, appreciate you always :)
Anonymous
26th May 2017 6:06pm
Wow Poet.......this brought me speechless........I've read it a couple of times.....gave me the feelng as if my mind stepped into your dream and its wanting it to come true......beautiful lines thru out......very thought provoking.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th May 2017 2:56pm
The Purple One, spreading her purple love... I felt it, n I'm honored :) always
Anonymous
28th May 2017 4:11pm
ugh poe your word play always gives me a case of the jels! omg the flow is absolutely slick, seamless, seemingly effortless
loved this!
loved this!
28th May 2017 4:49pm
My sweet Katja...you honor me, n I'm forever feeling blessed to have your support...thank you!!
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2017 8:46pm
28th May 2017 8:44pm
On my knees..hand extended toward your presence,
you humble me, thank you
ive no control over this heart that
beats in me til I'm no more
you humble me, thank you
ive no control over this heart that
beats in me til I'm no more
28th May 2017 8:55pm
Well clearly we're twins becuz you've humbled me too! :) deeply grateful for you my sweetness... thank you :)
30th May 2017 5:23am
This is another beautifully written piece. The imagery within this piece comes alive. There is a sense of hope, especially towards the end.
31st May 2017 11:00am
Hope...Yea, it's something I try to hold onto... Thank you my sweetness, truly grateful for your support always :)
1st Jun 2017 1:29pm
So beautiful, and the rhythms between words and lines harmoniously tight together. Especially like the ending with a bright hope. Thank you for sharing a good poem.
2nd Jun 2017 2:43pm
Your praise is very sweet I truly appreciate you for its your support. I thank you for it all :)
2nd Jun 2017 00:53am
Such a tender poem, dear Poetik!
The flow and the wording is amazing, always a joy to read you :-)
The flow and the wording is amazing, always a joy to read you :-)
2nd Jun 2017 3:04pm
Aaawww thank you sweetheart, I'm deeply grateful for you n your support...:)
2nd Jun 2017 2:58pm
wow Poe you really wove some magic with words on this one.. I am truly impressed by the depths of your skills.. the flow & message of the write is perfection.. really moving I would love to hear it read by you..
love Crim
love Crim
2nd Jun 2017 6:45pm
Aaaaawwww...that's such a sweet sweet bit a praise you blessed me with my dearest Crim... Thank you so much, I'm flattered n truly grateful as always...n hey, u never know ;)
3rd Jun 2017 2:27am
What is the apparition trying to real in you or unmask? That is still the unanswered question I think. I do get a feel for the visiting presence but is it terrifying or helping you in some way?
3rd Jun 2017 2:46pm
That's a good question, but I can only tell you it ain't terrifying at all... I do thank you for your thoughts n time on my ink n really appreciate it. :)
14th Jul 2017 4:14pm
14th Jul 2017 11:27pm
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it n I'm grateful for your time n thoughts here... :)
16th Jul 2017 8:38pm
16th Jul 2017 8:38pm
16th Jul 2017 9:54pm
Wow, another very sweet comment, I'm blushing big time! :) appreciate you lady :)
