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Universal Measure
Every grain of sand
counted
‘till time runs out …
that’s how many
Every star
counted
‘till shadows end …
that’s how vast
Every living thing
counted
‘till home they come …
that’s how loved.
Published 17th May 2017
| Edited 7th Mar 2024
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17th May 2017 11:09pm
knew a bloke once
whose every sentence
was carefully
measured
and found to be
miles away
from the truth
but I digress ... :)
whose every sentence
was carefully
measured
and found to be
miles away
from the truth
but I digress ... :)
30th Dec 2019 9:15pm
I must have digressed a long way before replying :))
Have a good new year 2020 - all the best, Josh.
Have a good new year 2020 - all the best, Josh.
17th May 2017 11:10pm
I was torn between Matthew 6:26 and Like 12:7. Than asked myself why I felt I had to choose between the two.
This is solidly grounding in its certainty, Josh.
This is solidly grounding in its certainty, Josh.
30th Dec 2019 9:16pm
Just catching up :)) somewhat belatedly. All the best for 2020, Ahavati. Best regards, Josh.
19th May 2017 5:47pm
I loved this poem but I find the last stanza more of a difficulty because I can't see it as true - but then that's just me :-)
30th Dec 2019 9:17pm
A belated thank you for the comment David - and all the best for 2020 and beyond. Best reagrds, Josh.
27th Jul 2018 11:08pm
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