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Somber impaler
Did you feel my arms around you tight,
my breath warm against your cheek?
I held you close, John, I held you so close
that only our heartbeats and the mingling scent
of skin would fit between us.
I drink in your nakedness, feel your heat
and passionate intent pressing hard against me.
As you find the depth of me, I become a willing slave
in the lovely darkness. My impaler, my lover,
I ache to taste desire on your lips.
The measure of space & time creates an echo,
a haunting distance between us,
yet when I gaze upon forbidden horizons
I’m sure that some wanton godess dipped her brush
upon an amatory palette and painted us both
You touched my soul
long before you touched my body.
I can't help but feel, across aphotic oceans
and caliginous fields, you will take me,
beautiful as any harlot, nude and shivering and paid for.
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my breath warm against your cheek?
I held you close, John, I held you so close
that only our heartbeats and the mingling scent
of skin would fit between us.
I drink in your nakedness, feel your heat
and passionate intent pressing hard against me.
As you find the depth of me, I become a willing slave
in the lovely darkness. My impaler, my lover,
I ache to taste desire on your lips.
The measure of space & time creates an echo,
a haunting distance between us,
yet when I gaze upon forbidden horizons
I’m sure that some wanton godess dipped her brush
upon an amatory palette and painted us both
You touched my soul
long before you touched my body.
I can't help but feel, across aphotic oceans
and caliginous fields, you will take me,
beautiful as any harlot, nude and shivering and paid for.
(Artwork unknown)
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Re. Somber impaler
16th May 2017 1:07pm
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17th May 2017 9:47am
Re. Somber impaler
16th May 2017 1:25pm
your affair with a brooding lover, Kas -
it happens at night, in the darkest dark;
nude & shivering, the way a woman should be taken...
it happens at night, in the darkest dark;
nude & shivering, the way a woman should be taken...
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Re: Re. Somber impaler
17th May 2017 10:33am
Yes, John, just that way. Nude and shivering while the lovely darkness keeps shameless secrets all to herself...
Re. Somber impaler
16th May 2017 1:51pm
"you will take me,
beautiful as any harlot, nude and shivering..."
I can concur with John that this is so true. If I don't shiver moments before I'm first touched in the taking, I know there will be no true passion to be had from me.
Beautiful write, dear Kasai.
beautiful as any harlot, nude and shivering..."
I can concur with John that this is so true. If I don't shiver moments before I'm first touched in the taking, I know there will be no true passion to be had from me.
Beautiful write, dear Kasai.
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Re: Re. Somber impaler
17th May 2017 11:06pm
Exactly, just as it should be. We need passion in our lives, things would be so uninteresting, so undesirable without it. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts,Jade, truly enjoy your visits...
Re. Somber impaler
16th May 2017 4:22pm
"You touched my soul
long before you touched my body" > when the soul is touched, magic can happen...
Your writings are a testimony of that... beautiful poem, dear Kasai!
long before you touched my body" > when the soul is touched, magic can happen...
Your writings are a testimony of that... beautiful poem, dear Kasai!
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Re: Re. Somber impaler
18th May 2017 11:43am
Magic-a good word to describe just that. Unexplainable, like a work of art that borders on madness. Thank you so much for the amazing comment, Duende, your visits mean much...
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16th May 2017 6:32pm
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19th May 2017 7:57am
Yes indeed, a vulnerability should be embraced and submission earned by who it's offered. Thank you for the visit, wise one...
Re. Somber impaler
17th May 2017 10:37pm
I like this; however, it leaves me questioning the vulnerabilities of women and sexuality more so than usual...which is not where my mind typically goes with intimacy. Thank you for the thought provoking
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19th May 2017 8:01am
So glad to leave you in thought, a poem should always leave us with something to ponder and that is a compliment in itself. Thank you for sharing your thoughts...
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Anonymous
19th May 2017 8:12pm
The one receiving should be seen mirrored in our every gifted vulnerable facet...beautiful write Sweet Kasai...my apologies for being absent...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Somber impaler
20th May 2017 9:14am
Yes, like a reflection of souls, and what a beautiful description, kind lady. No apologies needed between us, life pulls us away and eventually we find our way back. Thank you for the visit and lovely comment, Taryn, I truly enjoy them...
Re. Somber impaler
20th May 2017 12:21pm