October's Lover

What cannot be said in person, can many times
be said through the poetry of the soul. This seems
to be one of those situations. You have bared your
soul through poetry, and it is powerful, my friend.

thank you dearest Jerry so many times I've started messages & found it hard so I write what I feel thank you for embracing it.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda

Music has never failed me. And the musicians/muses in our lives who bring us the beauty are very special. This is a beautiful expression of emotion to yours, lovely dark angel

thank you lovely one especially for helping me get that second stanza to flow right it's deeply appreciated :) love Crim

Dark angel, you had this even without my 2 cents worth. Trust your voice. It knows   :)

aw thank you lovely one :) love you lady.. xo Crim

Kinda gave chills at the end

Serious Like

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thank you dearest Poet :) love Brenda

you mellow my rage            
temper it with an intellect

Wow that is perfect
Those are the people that carry us through
tough times.

thank you Tim yes this poet and a couple gorgeous ladies :) thank you kind soul for your thoughts and visit.. love Brenda

Beautiful work, both soulful and sensual.

I stay for you            
to write to you            
what burns my tongue            
to say directly        

The power of the written word prevails once again.  It's an honor to read you Lady Crim.

thank you dearest Sir Crow it's an honor to read you and call you friend.. love Crim :)

This is a lovely melancholic and romantic poem. Even though no strong details as to the appearances and characteristics of the lovers are given, we feel that we know everything that's important to know about their relationship.

thank you Jack for fully feeling the vibe of this write.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda...it is both a gift and a comfort when there is an ability to recognize, give and receive appreciation for what we and others offer each other...you recognize it, show the appreciation and in turn, the cycle continues...lovely write my love.

I love you so much!

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you my love it was a gift however brief & i'm grateful to this person for being who the are.. I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me on this write.. I love you with a passion.. xo Brenda

Brenda.. simply blown away.. you write with such passion.. always enjoy reading your art.. love always..












Dave

thank you Dave for showing me so much love my brother.. I love you.. xo Brenda