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Wind of harsh kisses
I wet my lips; I utter somber confessions of adversity,
rending the sun and it's downturned beams hostile ruins
upon the rough edges of my intolerant flesh.
My naked thoughts rove about,
reduced to so much dust that lament
is an agony of sabulous tears.
I follow my soldier's footprints down plundered streets
lined with fallen stars and paved in the splinters of forsaken hearts.
There's a woman like me on every salacious corner,
blowing us kisses from Russian red lips.
I sway to the descant made upon our names and denounce
my slumbering emotions. Love is cruel, but I am only flesh.
Every time you place your hand upon my cheek
and in my hair, you'll feel a trembling in your side
where God took your rib to make me.
(Artist unknown)
rending the sun and it's downturned beams hostile ruins
upon the rough edges of my intolerant flesh.
My naked thoughts rove about,
reduced to so much dust that lament
is an agony of sabulous tears.
I follow my soldier's footprints down plundered streets
lined with fallen stars and paved in the splinters of forsaken hearts.
There's a woman like me on every salacious corner,
blowing us kisses from Russian red lips.
I sway to the descant made upon our names and denounce
my slumbering emotions. Love is cruel, but I am only flesh.
Every time you place your hand upon my cheek
and in my hair, you'll feel a trembling in your side
where God took your rib to make me.
(Artist unknown)
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Re. Wind of harsh kisses
11th May 2017 10:57am
there's something scandalous in harsh kisses
& love, cruel & intolerant, Kas,
where we've plundered it...
& love, cruel & intolerant, Kas,
where we've plundered it...
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Re: Re. Wind of harsh kisses
12th May 2017 3:33am
Perhaps harsh kisses are more passionate, a flavor so refined that it's not for the faint of heart. It takes a certain kind to plunder the forbidden... Another beautiful comment, John. Thank you...
Re. Wind of harsh kisses
11th May 2017 11:16am
Wow, that ending really hit me...
N sweet goodness, does that woman have a sweet ass! lol
N sweet goodness, does that woman have a sweet ass! lol
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13th May 2017 6:35am
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11th May 2017 11:34am
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13th May 2017 6:38am
Nice to see you on my pages, thanks for the kind visit and a place on the list...
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11th May 2017 12:43pm
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13th May 2017 6:40am
Re. Wind of harsh kisses
11th May 2017 1:25pm
lovely Kasai you enchant with you love and lust it lights up my days..
love Crim
love Crim
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13th May 2017 6:46am
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13th May 2017 6:49am
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Anonymous
21st May 2017 7:54pm
Sweet Kasai, the eloquence in this is simply gorgeous...and the last stanza...perfection...you do leave me speechless at times...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Wind of harsh kisses
22nd May 2017 7:07am
Speachless.....so flattering. Truly appreciate all those amazing comments you leave me with. Thanks, Taryn...
Re. Wind of harsh kisses
12th Jul 2017 4:45am
not a single flaw in this exceptional piece...every single line and even word is perfect. a pleasure to read you.
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Re: Re. Wind of harsh kisses
12th Jul 2017 2:59pm
So very kind of you, the pleasure was mine. Thanks for the lovely visit glad you enjoyed...