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Kissy Kissy - - - for the kiss with a fist comp
A kiss with a fist
You’re better with none
There’s rarely a time
When violence can be fun
A kiss with a fist
You could do without
This is meant to be a marriage
Not a fucking boxing bout
A kiss with a fist
Only offered by scum
Run away from the dick
And never succumb
A kiss with a fist
Is never alright
The men that do it
Clearly are shite
A kiss with a fist
You’ll end up black and blue
Two eyes like a panda
Aren’t cute to view
A kiss with a fisting
Is a different type of sting
Be sure you want to take it
Be sure that it’s your thing
Published 9th May 2017
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9th May 2017 2:07am
9th May 2017 5:36pm
thank you sweet Brenda - I was hoping that the last stanza would be a poetic punch :-) 1000 ehugs on their way :-)
9th May 2017 2:47am
This made me laugh on a touchy subject for me. Thanks for that! Great write, David. <3
9th May 2017 5:38pm
It is always a bonus for me when readers see the funny side of what I write. thank you for the read and the comments - that means a lot :-)
10th May 2017 1:01am
9th May 2017 5:03pm
Nice poem you have here David, good luck in the comp!
the last two lines are unexpected nice play on words ;)
Zazzles Xx
the last two lines are unexpected nice play on words ;)
Zazzles Xx
9th May 2017 5:40pm
thanks Zazzles I am always so glad when a poet as good as you are, steps by to read and comment :-) means a lot :-)
12th May 2017 1:55pm
9th May 2017 7:08pm
Some people love boxing the hell out of each other - 'negative dysfunctional attraction' imho - but it takes all types.
