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Poetic Musing
feed me words today
I pray to the Gods
believe it or not
to gift me with something
anything to write about
I call to the spirits
to use me as channel
sometimes it's tepid water
that springs from this well
others beautiful vistas
to lose yourself in
I'm not feeling good
my benzos
leave me cold
by dawn's light
with a rawness you can't imagine
I want to visit that dream place
right now that door is locked to me
I miss your poetic voices today
that always distract me
in times of pain
& it is bloody hell
I find my mind wandering
back to the days I first started
writing my poetry here
I was a beginner
there were so many poets
I idolized as gods
they kicked my ass
I requested honest critique
& let me tell you I got it
at first angered
by their thoughts
then resignation
with knowledge they were right
made me want to get better
at this poetry thing
some of them have left
to go on to other things
I miss them
they will always be
what I strive to be
some have stayed
& continue to challenge me
to learn this art
I love you Poets
you are my greatest anxiety med
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25th Apr 2017 4:04am
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25th Apr 2017 4:20am
thank you I love you & all my poetic family.. together you are better than any anxiety med I take.. love Brenda
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25th Apr 2017 4:30am
I feel the same way. I long to disappear in you words. Excellent ink, Lady Crim!
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25th Apr 2017 4:36am
thank you my Darkest Lord I know in your darkened landscapes I always have a place.. love you my friend.. Crim
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25th Apr 2017 4:44am
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25th Apr 2017 9:08am
we never force poetry, Crim,
it comes when it's supposed to;
if they could put poetry in a pill...
it comes when it's supposed to;
if they could put poetry in a pill...
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25th Apr 2017 12:20pm
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25th Apr 2017 12:03pm
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25th Apr 2017 12:20pm
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25th Apr 2017 1:33pm
I miss the "regulars" who have left.
I've tried to leave but then I feel homeless
You will always be # 1 Brenda
It's a lot of pressure, I know
Thank yiu for your dedication
I always learn from you ....
X
I've tried to leave but then I feel homeless
You will always be # 1 Brenda
It's a lot of pressure, I know
Thank yiu for your dedication
I always learn from you ....
X
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26th Apr 2017 8:29pm
thank you Poet so do I but I am ever grateful for you & many others that have stayed.. spilling here.. you are so kind to me.. you're # 1 to me too.. love Brenda
Re. Poetic Musing
25th Apr 2017 1:52pm
I find daily life a real struggle - I seriously don't know where I would be without friends like you on DU :-)
sending you 1000 ehugs :-)
sending you 1000 ehugs :-)
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26th Apr 2017 8:30pm
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2017 2:08pm
I wish I had been able to read this when you posted. I've been battling a migraine and reading was just too much yesterday so I'm a bit behind today. Inspiration is a tricky thing, I think. My mind goes in turns...static or manic. I try to capture what comes when the words flow and let the rest of it go. Invariably if I try to force a write I end up hating it later. Your words are heartfelt and pure, and for that alone they will always be beautiful. Much love, beautiful dark angel
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26th Apr 2017 8:31pm
thank you lovely one sorry you were feeling badly.. yes I agree when I force something I end up hating it.. this was an honest spill that came easily enough for me I deeply appreciate you embracing me & it.. love Crim
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25th Apr 2017 2:14pm
Putting together words to make a worthwhile
poem is not for sissies. I used to take honest
critiques, and yes, they have helped me. But
these days I am not trying to impress, I merely
want to put my poems out there however they
happen. This is good poetry, Brenda.
poem is not for sissies. I used to take honest
critiques, and yes, they have helped me. But
these days I am not trying to impress, I merely
want to put my poems out there however they
happen. This is good poetry, Brenda.
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thank you Jerry you're so right it's tough at times to write something with any kind of power.. I'm grateful for your ink.. love Brenda
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25th Apr 2017 8:03pm
Thanks for sharing your experience and wisdom, Lady Crim. This should be required reading for novices, and it's a delight to those who have been following you.
I want to visit that dream place
right now that door is locked to me
I miss your poetic voices today
that always distract me
in times of pain
& it is bloody hell
You may struggle and be distracted but you're still writing up a storm. And I love that last line! I'd rather read your writes than pop a daddy's little helper. Just as habit forming though....
I want to visit that dream place
right now that door is locked to me
I miss your poetic voices today
that always distract me
in times of pain
& it is bloody hell
You may struggle and be distracted but you're still writing up a storm. And I love that last line! I'd rather read your writes than pop a daddy's little helper. Just as habit forming though....
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26th Apr 2017 8:34pm
thank you Sir Crow inspiration is a tricky thing but even when I'm uninspired I can count on the rest of you to calm my anxiety.. love Crim
Re. Poetic Musing
25th Apr 2017 10:11pm
nice, okay & all, but..........
.......you need an 'edge' to keep ye out of cliche'ville......
for you, i dont pretend know what that means. Ha!
i really dont KNOW anyfckn thing..................bless ye, dear
.......you need an 'edge' to keep ye out of cliche'ville......
for you, i dont pretend know what that means. Ha!
i really dont KNOW anyfckn thing..................bless ye, dear
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26th Apr 2017 8:35pm
thank you Daniel try as I might I end up in cliche'ville more often than I care to.. love Brenda
Re. Poetic Musing
26th Apr 2017 00:13am
Crim,
Nice to know I am not alone in my lack of muse... but this is honest writing, vulnerable and unpretentious. That is fantastic! Well done you:)
Bless
Nice to know I am not alone in my lack of muse... but this is honest writing, vulnerable and unpretentious. That is fantastic! Well done you:)
Bless
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26th Apr 2017 8:36pm
thank you Mel no we all go through those days dear one.. I deeply appreciate your comment.. love Crim
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This made me tear up, for real.I have tried to leave here as well and honestly, it seriously felt like something was missing from me. I have tried to let go of something that has been so profound in my life. I will never let this part of me go.No. Fucking. Way. . Its who I am, its who we are. Much love to you crim. You truly are a beautiful soul. <3
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26th Apr 2017 9:06pm
aw dearest Mysterious one this place would be a sad, lonely place without a voice such as yours so grateful you are here :) love Crim
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Anonymous
27th Apr 2017 00:43am
You're simply the queen.. and i bow to you.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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28th Apr 2017 2:08am
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Anonymous
12th May 2017 6:11am
My Beautiful Brenda...your words have blanketed me with calm and love, passion and anger, lust and carnality and I thank the Fates daily for our collision...you are the muse for so many and to be considered such for you is an honor...I love you always my lovely one!
Love Taryn xoxo
Love Taryn xoxo
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12th May 2017 11:33am
thank you beautiful one I too thank the fates for your presence.. I am happy to evoke so much passion.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda