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Day By Day
Day by day the drips descend
coating a soul left lying to fend
harsh realities of a homeless heart
Troubled the time tries to mend
weaving her way past the defenses
into the vast unknown now roam
Light sparking light darkness unfolds
daily lifts to corners rarely creased
warm fills the night and tomorrows never cease
coating a soul left lying to fend
harsh realities of a homeless heart
Troubled the time tries to mend
weaving her way past the defenses
into the vast unknown now roam
Light sparking light darkness unfolds
daily lifts to corners rarely creased
warm fills the night and tomorrows never cease
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Re. Day By Day
2nd Apr 2017 2:36pm
Re. Day By Day
2nd Apr 2017 3:34pm
Re. Day By Day
2nd Apr 2017 3:44pm
I love the word choices and rhymes in this piece. Emotive and amazing as always xxx
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2nd Apr 2017 3:54pm
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Re. Day By Day
3rd Apr 2017 2:54am
"Tomorrows never cease" - sometimes that is what keeps me going. Well done and very touching.
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Re. Day By Day
3rd Apr 2017 4:10am
Beautiful ...
"harsh realities of a homeless heart" < wow ...
Filled with the struggle... but always with a breath of hope ...
"harsh realities of a homeless heart" < wow ...
Filled with the struggle... but always with a breath of hope ...
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Re. Day By Day
5th Apr 2017 3:12pm
I agree with the above... damn, that homeless heart!
Love that last line...
(again... I'm behind on commenting)
Love that last line...
(again... I'm behind on commenting)
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