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Luv's Energy
turn out the light sweetheart
let's disappear inside each other's souls
make me feel our luv so intently
I can't help screaming your name
trace the moonbeam across my skin
want to feel the universes energy
thru your luving fingertips
caressing my every desire so softly
oh yes yes my sweet luv
touch me like no other night
take me to a spiritual realm
that words will never explain
a height in luv that only our souls
will understand the true meaning
of all that we share thru a luving moment
that will forever burn deep within us
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
let's disappear inside each other's souls
make me feel our luv so intently
I can't help screaming your name
trace the moonbeam across my skin
want to feel the universes energy
thru your luving fingertips
caressing my every desire so softly
oh yes yes my sweet luv
touch me like no other night
take me to a spiritual realm
that words will never explain
a height in luv that only our souls
will understand the true meaning
of all that we share thru a luving moment
that will forever burn deep within us
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 30th Mar 2017
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30th Mar 2017 5:04am
30th Mar 2017 5:19am
Hey Trace......what beautiful motivational words you leave upon my ink.....thank you for making me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 5:09am
trace the moonbeam across my skin
want to feel the universes energy
thru your
luving fingertips
caressing my every desire so softly
incredibly beautiful words sis
want to feel the universes energy
thru your
luving fingertips
caressing my every desire so softly
incredibly beautiful words sis
30th Mar 2017 5:22am
Hey Bro......thank you for blessing me with your sweet words......glad you enjoyed those lines.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Apr 2017 8:36pm
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 5:14am
Beautiful Sun Kissed...a lullaby before bedtime which warms the heart and soul...thank you for that...With love - Sweet S xo :)
30th Mar 2017 5:24am
Hey Sweet S....just returning the many night caps you've written for us....your writes warm better than wine.......thank you for your sweetness upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 5:35am
Wow that is a lot of love for one man?
30th Mar 2017 5:47am
Hey SG.......honored to see your smile upon my ink.......thank you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 7:37am
Sex is physical, but love..... ooooh love is beyond that. It's a spiritual experience, a sharing and touching of souls, adventures into the universe, always discovering, always growing. Loved this.
1st Apr 2017 8:58pm
2nd Apr 2017 1:57am
Hey Miz.......you're absolutely right......luv is so much more than sex......it's not just sharing the act of luv but giving it with all your heart and soul.......that happens naturally and sacredly.......thank you for beautiufl words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 2:53pm
2nd Apr 2017 1:11am
Awe Poet........you always make me smile.......thank you for showing luv my way upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 3:58pm
You have a way of touching the eyes with words that turn my word purple with luv G...
You so beautifully display your soul in the folds of your verse!
JJ
You so beautifully display your soul in the folds of your verse!
JJ
2nd Apr 2017 1:22am
Hey JJ.......you're words make me tear up........thank you for such encouraging words you so gracefully bless me with........appreciate you greatly my friend........purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 4:44pm
A great piece of writing, flower! You spelled out exactly what you desired from your lover, so no doubts could exist. And when that happens everything is in place and awaiting.
2nd Apr 2017 1:30am
Hey Jerry......your smile upon my ink is always a delight........thank you for your sensitve words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 7:26pm
2nd Apr 2017 1:32am
Hey JT........thank you for your shinning smile upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
I could feel the love & passion in this poem. Lovely write my purple friend. x
2nd Apr 2017 1:37am
Hey Purple........happy you could feel the luv from my heart to his.......thank you for leaving purple prints upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 9:22pm
This is lightly erotic, but the luv here is emotional, spiritual and thoroughly magic. My favorite lines:
trace the moonbeam across my skin
want to feel the universes energy
thru your luving fingertips
caressing my every desire so softly
He's a gentle man who knows you more than any other, every sublime detail. If he's your source of energy then more power to you, sweet Flower. Excellent work!
trace the moonbeam across my skin
want to feel the universes energy
thru your luving fingertips
caressing my every desire so softly
He's a gentle man who knows you more than any other, every sublime detail. If he's your source of energy then more power to you, sweet Flower. Excellent work!
2nd Apr 2017 1:53am
Hey Crow........your words honor me my friend........yes......he's my muse of inspiration.......he's my energy......he makes me feel passion within me I didn't know was there........glad you liked those lines and you felt the magic.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Mar 2017 9:51pm
Echo Miz C and Crowfly. Second verse favourite one. All in all, girls, good romantic mood-setting words to try out on your man when you ask him to put that light out.
2nd Apr 2017 2:16am
Hey Solomon......so glad you can feel the romantic mood.......thank you so much for smiling upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
31st Mar 2017 00:43am
That is one of my favorite Rumi quotes, Flowered One.
"turn out the light sweetheart
let's disappear inside each other's souls"
What an opening. Sets the entire essence of the piece.
"turn out the light sweetheart
let's disappear inside each other's souls"
What an opening. Sets the entire essence of the piece.
2nd Apr 2017 2:36am
Hey Ahavati........your words are priceless to me.......glad you liked the quote......thought it went well with my ink.......happy you felt the essence of my write.......thank you for graceful uplifting words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st Apr 2017 9:01pm
2nd Apr 2017 2:38am
Hey Sek.....Welcme back.......thank you for smiling once again upon my ink.......what's honored to get a "Brrrrrhhhhhhh" from you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Apr 2017 00:59am
2nd Apr 2017 2:51am
Hey David.......purple luv is very special and sacred.......I feel it always........thank you for always making me smile.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
24th Apr 2017 9:58pm
30th Apr 2017 8:57pm
Hey X.......thank you for visiting my special place os bliss........it's a secret place I hold deeply within my heart......hoping it will always be there.......appreciate you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Apr 2017 3:26pm
Deep soul ink right here Purple Princess! I can always read you and get such a warm heart feeling ; )
30th Apr 2017 8:59pm
Awe Lena......thank you my precious friend........I'm glad my words leave you with warm feelings......they certainly do me........purple warm luv & hugs your way......xo :)
30th Apr 2017 5:46am
you have been out into the woods
searching for some solace
as guys here wait in earnestness
holding theirs
in hopes
searching for some solace
as guys here wait in earnestness
holding theirs
in hopes
30th Apr 2017 9:04pm
Hey Bro........thank you for your kind words.......just needed a break away.......been going thru some changes in life......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st May 2017 4:54am
