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With Or Without You
In the cryptic mourning of my dream
Awakened
by soft caresses on alabaster skin
so sensuous a touch longing to last
Still lost
Hands free to ease a need
recede to places and days of old
where hearts laid tight
on frigid nights
and your essence engulfed my being
Visions blind the day
and touches get stronger
but pleasure, you will not win tonight
I will hold out
until again
with you
my soul
resides
Awakened
by soft caresses on alabaster skin
so sensuous a touch longing to last
Still lost
Hands free to ease a need
recede to places and days of old
where hearts laid tight
on frigid nights
and your essence engulfed my being
Visions blind the day
and touches get stronger
but pleasure, you will not win tonight
I will hold out
until again
with you
my soul
resides
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Re. With Or Without You
Anonymous
26th Mar 2017 4:01pm
There is more to this one than one sees on the surface, I think. Beautiful from beginning to end, no matter how one reads it
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27th Mar 2017 00:04am
Re. With Or Without You
26th Mar 2017 5:57pm
That last stanza is powerful.. holding out is the hardest thing, but hope is the most wonderful of things to have in ones possession. Great write.
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27th Mar 2017 00:04am
Re. With Or Without You
26th Mar 2017 10:02pm
The longing in this leaves me sad. I identify with alot of your words and it is comforting. Looking forward to future thoughts. Thanks.
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27th Mar 2017 00:06am
Re. With Or Without You
Anonymous
27th Mar 2017 2:22am
You certainly displayed here Tim that there's more to love than physical touch, that true love making goes skin deep, your pen is quite exquisite in this poem.
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27th Mar 2017 4:53am
Thanks Vee ...I do hold that true for me but I know it is different for everyone and that is fine too.
Re. With Or Without You
27th Mar 2017 3:52am
To find that place inside yourself that knows love is more powerful than anything else is an eye opener. And it is always worth the wait.
Nice writing.
Nice writing.
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27th Mar 2017 4:54am
Re. With Or Without You
28th Mar 2017 10:43am
So strong and powerful this one, reminds be of old fashioned kind of love and far from todays generation.
FC
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FC
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28th Mar 2017 2:32pm