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MAGIC
Each day my illness' brings me pain,
On ev'ry nerve it seems to rain.
The coping of my riddled brain
Has learned to help me not complain.
I don't say 'woe is me' to self.
I turn my nose up at the wealth
That others want more than their health,
To leave their kindness on a shelf.
But me, I'm writing poetry,
Embracing thrills' discovery.
I dream to be a fantasy
From out of shell, yes!, to be free.
I think myself as light as air,
A gentle sprite that's hardly there
With sprigs of honeycomb to wear,
And flower blossoms in my hair.
From forest top is where I see
Winged things above the canopy,
To join in flight I wish to be
And laugh among the birds & trees.
For this is where the mischief sway
Is spread with mirth in which I play,
A riot's life of ev'ry day
My barefoot jig among the fray.
The forest creatures dance and race
With wonderment upon each face.
'Tis I that has them feel the grace
My magic touching every trace.
This is my happiness profound
As ev'ry chorus' cheerful sound,
All rising up and would surround
My hidden place, my kingdom found.
I only hope that someday soon,
Across the face of earth a boon
Will see for all to be in tune,
To love not hate from magic's swoon.
CopyrightŠ️Jade Pandora 2017-18. All Rights Reserved.
Image: Andreea Cernestean, Romania
Published 25th Mar 2017
| Edited 15th Mar 2018
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25th Mar 2017 2:14pm
Darling Grace, thank you so much. As always, a channel you become across the miles.
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25th Mar 2017 4:28pm
This is absolutely breath-taking. The courage that comes through the sadness is amazing. Beautiful thoughts you have here. Beautiful...
26th Mar 2017 4:11pm
My grateful thanks to you for sharing this with me, soul, and warm welcome to DUP. -Jade
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25th Mar 2017 9:24pm
This is one way to relieve the pain and you've conjured a world where it's refused entrance.
For this is where the mischief sway
Is spread with mirth in which I play,
A riot's life of ev'ry day
My barefoot jig among the fray.
There's joy in these lines Jade. And I love the rhyme scheme! I never seems forced, but playful as can be. Fine work!
For this is where the mischief sway
Is spread with mirth in which I play,
A riot's life of ev'ry day
My barefoot jig among the fray.
There's joy in these lines Jade. And I love the rhyme scheme! I never seems forced, but playful as can be. Fine work!
26th Mar 2017 5:26pm
Awww, thank you so very much, dear crowfly friend, I'm so glad to know this. And yes! Pain is refused, always!
25th Mar 2017 10:32pm
Beautifully magical piece, perfectly titled.
"I think myself as light as air
A gentle sprite that's hardly there" Those lines stuck out to me especially, they really hit me hard.
Great poem, Jade. Talented pen as usual.
~anonshadow😏
"I think myself as light as air
A gentle sprite that's hardly there" Those lines stuck out to me especially, they really hit me hard.
Great poem, Jade. Talented pen as usual.
~anonshadow😏
26th Mar 2017 5:27pm
Thank you so much, dear Anon... your comments & appreciation always make me a little breathless.
28th Mar 2017 7:04pm
28th Mar 2017 7:20pm
Thank you so much, UV, for visiting for a read & the comment. It's good to see you back, it's been a while.
29th Mar 2017 2:09am
I have diabetes type 2 and I constantly struggle with it. So, I get trying to escape iinto a fantasy world. Excellent write, Jade.
Dear Frank, I can't thank you enough, for your visit, for your express, and the honor of your trust & appreciation. It means a great deal to me.🌾
31st Mar 2017 5:08am
31st Mar 2017 5:29am
Thank you, darling Mel, it's always an honor when I do, and to hear back from a fellow poet.📬
18th Mar 2018 00:25am
I love the appreciation that drenches this piece in positivity. Beautiful to see thoughts soar above illness. Best read today!
