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The Veil of What Seems
Arch enemy
Openly does lay
Grinning
Sly eyes
Flightless
Slowly creeping
Inside is nothing
Inside I could hide
And never wake
The dreams end
When the silk razors
Are embedded within.
Openly does lay
Grinning
Sly eyes
Flightless
Slowly creeping
Inside is nothing
Inside I could hide
And never wake
The dreams end
When the silk razors
Are embedded within.
Published 15th Mar 2017
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16th Mar 2017 5:22am
I'm glad it has that effect, I always enjoy poetry that morphs and changes with new reads. Proud to hear you enjoyed it, Melia. Always an honor for you to drop by:) ~anonshadow😏
15th Mar 2017 6:57pm
You sounded like you were looking inwards into yourself:) Anonshadow...good write.
This was indeed an inner reflection. Isn't it interesting to look inward at yourself? You see things you never thought were there.
Thank you for reading, Grace. An honor as always:)
~anonshadow😏
Thank you for reading, Grace. An honor as always:)
~anonshadow😏
