Drawn by the Moon

Best thing EVER to catch snowflakes on the tongue. But you're braver than I am doing it under trees! :D

But seriously, I loved the warm memories this conjured, Je.  

Because you have requested honest critique, I want to honor that by the following offering:  


She stands among the [I'd move 'the' to L2]
tallest trees  
the moon glistening [do you need 'the'?]
sending light between the branches [Do you need 'sending' or 'the'?]
to caress her face  

In essence, it would read  


She stands among  
the tallest trees  
moon glistening  
light between branches  
to caress her face  

You can tighten up a lot by removing excess wordage.  

Again, I really enjoyed this and the memories it conjured in my heart. Very self-empowered and evoking work.

Thank you so much Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments  .. and the honest critique .. much appreciated  ... I have tried to be less wordy .. but sometimes things slip by me ... I actually worked on making the bottom stanzas less wordy, but then forgot to go back over those first lines .. so thank you again .. ox

very seasonal - a pleasant celebration of winter

Thank you so much Sweetoblivion for the read and thoughtful comments  ... much appreciated

So beautiful dear...Perfect in every word choice ☺

Thank you so much Tim for the read and beautiful comoments... greatly appreciated  .. For the add to your RL .. humbled and honored 😊

Deep

Thank you so much TrueNature for the read and thoughtful comment .. much appreciated

Serene piece. Evokes fond memories of nights in the Sierras staring up through majestic, towering redwoods and sugar pines at glorious blankets of stars. Brava!

Thank you so much Gahddess for the read and thoughtful comments  ... much appreciated... being under those majestic trees alone would be an amazing experience I hope to have someday ... ox

"undulating clouds of glittering white," - I love that line.

Thank you so much Josh for the read and thoughtful comments  ... much appreciated

She does have the power..
I enjoyed the read.
Thanks

Thank you so much Mysticstones for the read and thoughtful comments  .. much appreciated

your description holds such beauty that through reading it I can be there and feel that - now that's what I call poetry :-)

Thank You so much David for the read and thoughtful comments... that my words transported you there means more than I can say...

Fine lines and light cast by this moon - very fine write

Thank you so much whale for the read and very fine comments .. much appreciated

the stillness in your poem,
it's nature's diorama;
there's no artist like her...

Thank you so much JohnFeddeler for the read and beautiful comments .. much appreciated  .. nature, she truly is spectacular

"and all is well in her world" > snow (nature) can do that to us...

Such a pure and intimite poem, it was almost like I was standing next to you, sharing this beautiful moment!

Thank you so much Duende for the read and thoughtful comments...much appreciated

lips and tongue

warmth of desire contrasting to the depicted cold beauty

Thank you so much debug for the read and thoughtful comments... much appreciated