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Fuck Poetry
your swagger
gets me excited
you do it with words
saddle um up
& ride them hard
your passion feeds me
stirs something deep inside
I'll eat the ash
of your verse
& spit fire
inhale the smoky flavor
that your straight up talk delivers
high on the nicotine poetics
staining the walls of my mind
you leave an indelible mark
pissing poetry
down our throats
arrogant no
just know what you mean
mean what you say
& I'm loving it
in need of the rough ride
fuck poetry lives to die
goes down in flames
or doesn't bother
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 16th Feb 2017
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16th Feb 2017 5:40pm
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Anonymous
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16th Feb 2017 6:01pm
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16th Feb 2017 6:09pm
16th Feb 2017 6:17pm
Way to burn up the pages
talented lady,
Scorching poetry with a smokey aftertaste...
talented lady,
Scorching poetry with a smokey aftertaste...
16th Feb 2017 6:38pm
16th Feb 2017 7:42pm
There's a whole lot of sass in this one and I'm loving it! Many hugs and much love... :)
Willow
Willow
20th Feb 2017 8:30pm
thank you lovely Willow you gave me big smiles :) hugs and love back.. xo Brenda
16th Feb 2017 8:13pm
I admire people who can throw down raw and honestly. DUP is blessed to have many. Good ink, Brenda.
20th Feb 2017 8:30pm
16th Feb 2017 8:50pm
we got burned by the fire
& tasted the ash, Crim,
so we knew it was poetry...
& tasted the ash, Crim,
so we knew it was poetry...
20th Feb 2017 8:31pm
Anonymous
16th Feb 2017 9:06pm
Hella yes!!
Raw and totally kickass! 💋
Only you...Crim.
Love your fierceness!
Raw and totally kickass! 💋
Only you...Crim.
Love your fierceness!
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20th Feb 2017 8:34pm
I did my best my Dark Lord forgive this lady dark for not picking up her blackened quill more often.. thank you I cherish your visits.. love Crim
Anonymous
17th Feb 2017 5:27am
I'm with Lord Hades...fuck us and fuck us hard Beautiful...I look forward to slip about and lick the cream...it's been a while ;)
I love you so much!
xoxo Taryn
I love you so much!
xoxo Taryn
20th Feb 2017 8:35pm
I love you lady :) I did my best but sigh I fear I didn't deliver the creamy's I wanted to.. thank you dear one you are adored and loved.. xo Brenda
Anonymous
17th Feb 2017 7:14am
lord it's a scorcher!
preach, beautiful one, preach!
loved it
xo
preach, beautiful one, preach!
loved it
xo
20th Feb 2017 8:36pm
thank you beautiful one so happy you felt the fire of this write.. love Brenda
17th Feb 2017 2:35pm
Hoist the words high and let them hang till the stink of them makes any pretty thoughts wretch - cool manifesto for DU -Brenda
20th Feb 2017 8:37pm
aw thank you Whale no declaration though a type of poetry I enjoy ;) love Brenda
17th Feb 2017 3:47pm
Mmgawd I don't know if its
just me... because fuck this is
hottt! and a damn turn on
-Howlings
just me... because fuck this is
hottt! and a damn turn on
-Howlings
20th Feb 2017 8:38pm
thank you beautiful Howlings my muse made me feel a bit heated when writing this happy you felt it ;) love Crim
Anonymous
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17th Feb 2017 9:22pm
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20th Feb 2017 8:39pm
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18th Feb 2017 10:19pm
the metaphor is spot on and should make all poets think about what they are writing and why - one of the most thought provoking poems I have read for a long, long while :-)
20th Feb 2017 8:40pm
19th Feb 2017 00:07am
Always love your extreme content, Crim, be it rhapsodic verse or fuck poetry. I think I'd opt for the latter today.
fuck poetry lives to die
goes down in flames
or doesn't bother
Hope this doesn't combust before I post it to my list. It's definitely worth the bother.
fuck poetry lives to die
goes down in flames
or doesn't bother
Hope this doesn't combust before I post it to my list. It's definitely worth the bother.
20th Feb 2017 8:41pm
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 2:00pm
Brenda.. brilliantly done.. really loved this.. love..
Dave
Dave
3rd Mar 2017 6:56am
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 8:07pm
Love it!
3rd Mar 2017 6:57am
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2017 12:46pm
A million times and we keep coming back .. well said lovely lady
✨Trish
✨Trish
3rd Mar 2017 6:58am
