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Infernal Sating
arsenic eyes confront me
filled with wrath
black roses lie at his feet
an offering of contrition
I blush with a sickly pallor
my Master in a blackened rage
summoned this lady dark
I did not hearken
His blasphemy
injected into my soul
by His forked cock
that doth pierce
this virgin whore's cunt
cumming inside me insidiously
spilled his venomous seed
"speak now Crimsin
legion is now freed inside of you"
my body collared and leashed
for His pleasure
I now obey
rosary bead bruises
adorn my flesh
where the Dark Lord
strangled the false light from me
taken to Hades the underworld
where I learned
to be an obedient slave
on His wheel of pain
He once again
taught me the language of the damned
on my knees before him
I took my communion
from His unholy member
He fed me demon seed
so that I would bleed crimson
through my gaping maw
formed in a perpetual scream
tormented in His diabolical abode
forever craving His infernal sating
taken to Hades the underworld
where I learned
to be an obedient slave
on His wheel of pain
tormented in His diabolical abode
forever craving His infernal sating
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 20th Feb 2017
| Edited 21st Feb 2017
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20th Feb 2017 7:55pm
Infernally fine writing Crim! I love the majesty of your wording and the spectacular view of Hades and it's libidinous master. He'll have his hands full with you, fine lady. Thrilling work!
21st Feb 2017 11:17pm
20th Feb 2017 8:09pm
You always take me to places I wouldn't think to wander. And you always deliver the fire. Much love, my lady :)
Willow
Willow
21st Feb 2017 11:18pm
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20th Feb 2017 9:13pm
Whoa! This is the ultimate in the master/slave world.
The very first stanza grabbed me and I was there for
the finish, and what a finish it was!
The very first stanza grabbed me and I was there for
the finish, and what a finish it was!
21st Feb 2017 11:19pm
Anonymous
20th Feb 2017 10:40pm
Oh, my Queen of Darkness.
I am *speechless* but not
in so many words ... Your underworld
is intriguing, as always.
And as always, you do not sugarcoat
which makes you and your poetic ink
dangerous ... and I don't mind.
~love you, your Ally in Darkness, Devlin
21st Feb 2017 11:20pm
thank you my Queen of Darkness I cherish your thoughts and visits.. love Brenda
21st Feb 2017 00:38am
Face them head on, Brenda. Then write it out if a pure spirit no-holds-barred.
21st Feb 2017 11:21pm
"taken to Hades the underworld
where I learned
to be an obedient slave
on His wheel of pain"
Of course these are my favorite lines. This entire poem is spectacular, a true masterpiece inked by the quill dipped in Stygian waters
where I learned
to be an obedient slave
on His wheel of pain"
Of course these are my favorite lines. This entire poem is spectacular, a true masterpiece inked by the quill dipped in Stygian waters
21st Feb 2017 11:21pm
21st Feb 2017 5:06am
Whoa Crim...this sent fire thru my veins.......I'm lost for words of your astounding talent and gift of words......amazing.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Feb 2017 11:22pm
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21st Feb 2017 11:23pm
in this torment my passion is ignited thank you for feeling me John.. love Crim
21st Feb 2017 10:29am
Like the cut of a double edged sword,
it hides more than one meaning.
Intensely dark and lovely, Crim...
it hides more than one meaning.
Intensely dark and lovely, Crim...
21st Feb 2017 11:23pm
thank you lovely Kasai for feeling the many shades of darkness in this write.. love Crim
21st Feb 2017 2:59pm
21st Feb 2017 11:24pm
21st Feb 2017 4:04pm
Tempered in the fires of torture , pain and lust. You always take it to a new level Brenda!
21st Feb 2017 11:24pm
25th Feb 2017 2:16pm
Brenda.. only you can describe in vivid imagery, the passion that burns within the darkness.. truly dig this.. love..
Dave
Dave
3rd Mar 2017 6:59am
