Dead Trick

It's kind of a relief to to read this from your pen.  

Hard Brenda
Soft Brenda

Love them both

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thank you dearest Poet for loving both sides of me.. xo Brenda

Astute observation, Brenda. And very well written. Some have reached the point of survival living day-to-day without hope or dreams. Beyond the obvious lies compassion in this write in raising awareness.

thank you Sage One yes it happens all too often here.. I appreciate you understanding that from this unnerving write.. love Brenda

I absolutely love this, the last two lines are perfect and killer  - the kinda lines I wish I had written :-)

thank you graciously David made me blush :) love Brenda

see her in a body bag with the others
on that long black train;
devastating, Crim...

thank you John for the poetic comment.. love Crim

Such a sad, yet fierce write.
Your talent is endless through your ink, dear Crim.

thank you lovely Rooted One.. love Crim

There you go my ladyloves.. .

struck by the power of words ;
but get it I do..




-Howlings

thank you lovely Howlings I know this write may seem callous but I tried to write from the hunter's perspective.. I deeply appreciate you gracing my pages.. love Crim

hardfuckingcore, Lady Crim

thank you Darkest Lord smiles at you devilishly ;) love Crim

I've seen them. I've spoken to them. I've fucked them. I've moved on.

I hear you Jerry just a bit of the darkness creeping up on me today mood shift idk.. thank you for the comment.. love Brenda

Beautiful one, you write of these lost and forgotten souls with both a hard voice and compassion for their circumstances.  This is what I love about you...there's a softness even in your hard lines.  You, my lady, are beautiful.  :)
Willow

thank you lovely Willow for seeing beauty even in my hard lines.. love Brenda

Brenda.. the truth can be very brutal.. but the highway is full of victims.. and your words covey, the dark underbelly of this cruel world.. as always, nicely done.. love..



Dave

thank you Dave was trying to convey the true darkness of this world i'm pleased it was felt.. love Brenda

You make it sound like a dark sporting event. Harsh and seedy! Enjoyed it very much Brenda.

thank you dearest Xmar yes I believe for them it is sport and it's an ugly truth.. love Brenda