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The Ancient Language
I've come from far away
traveled the cosmos
just to reach you
endless journeys
to touch your soul
do you feel the rain
as it kisses skin?
ever so tenderly
washes away the ashes
of yesterday
everyday born anew
death but a doorway
to your next chapter
I've sent you messages
have you read them?
they are deeply etched
on every living thing
the bark of the trees
in the the gush of the wind
the crash of the waves
it's an ancient language
are you listening?
it's written in the constellations
my deep love for you
all nature bares witness
to the truth
have you seen me today?
as I lit on a blossom
humming bird thirsts
do you also thirst for knowledge?
follow the stars home
they will light your way
*Author's Note this is unusual for me but my muse leads and I follow
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 5th Feb 2017
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5th Feb 2017 8:50am
it's a primal code that everyone understands, Crim;
poetry given by the stars...
poetry given by the stars...
5th Feb 2017 9:19am
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5th Feb 2017 4:27pm
5th Feb 2017 1:13pm
When you are subject to the ancient language there is nothing to object to - very fine write
5th Feb 2017 4:28pm
thank you dearest Whale I imagine a language that was spoken before people walked the Earth and is still spoken by all nature it'self.. love Brenda
5th Feb 2017 3:00pm
Unusual or not this had a spiritual flow to it...I love the little couplet
"as I lit on a blossom
humming bird thirsts"
"as I lit on a blossom
humming bird thirsts"
5th Feb 2017 4:28pm
Unusual for you, yes. Perfect for you, hell yes. You give
into yourself as you probe the inner you searching for
a way to commit yourself and have that commitment
understood. I think you have succeeded. I thoroughly
like this "unusual"" you.
into yourself as you probe the inner you searching for
a way to commit yourself and have that commitment
understood. I think you have succeeded. I thoroughly
like this "unusual"" you.
5th Feb 2017 4:29pm
Anonymous
5th Feb 2017 5:07pm
This is a true masterpiece of a heart's call.
I love it!
It is so very beautiful. You can feel true serenity stirring within, while reading every word.
Something in which I needed today.
Thank you for sharing it.
It is a keeper for me.
I love it!
It is so very beautiful. You can feel true serenity stirring within, while reading every word.
Something in which I needed today.
Thank you for sharing it.
It is a keeper for me.
5th Feb 2017 5:37pm
Anonymous
5th Feb 2017 6:44pm
My Beautiful Brenda...tranquil elegance is what I felt as I read this stunning, soft soften and visibly heartfelt ink...radiating from within you lovely one...so beautiful is this and as are you...
I love you so very much!!
xoxo Taryn
I love you so very much!!
xoxo Taryn
5th Feb 2017 8:03pm
thank you my beautiful one for showing me deep love to me and this write.. I love you :) xo Brenda
5th Feb 2017 10:38pm
This is the voice of message of Source if we but open our ears and eyes.
Beautiful, Brenda.
Beautiful, Brenda.
7th Feb 2017 10:09am
thank you dearest Sage One I am attempting to heed the voice of Source.. love Brenda
5th Feb 2017 11:31pm
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6th Feb 2017 4:19am
It's indeed not like your usual lines, but I ejoyed it very much!
Such a tender and elegant poem, you must have a special muse... I'm happy for you :-)
Love, Duende
Such a tender and elegant poem, you must have a special muse... I'm happy for you :-)
Love, Duende
7th Feb 2017 10:10am
6th Feb 2017 5:59am
"it's an ancient language
are you listening?"
I hear you. And my thirst for knowledge may never be quenched. But after reading this I am much closer to enlightenment. Thank you❤
are you listening?"
I hear you. And my thirst for knowledge may never be quenched. But after reading this I am much closer to enlightenment. Thank you❤
7th Feb 2017 10:12am
thank you Alyssa we each have a path I believe and I feel you are a very enlightened one reading you :) love Crim
6th Feb 2017 1:21pm
New Brenda Speak
Can feel the lightness in your flow
Glad you crossed over to harmony
Like
xx
Can feel the lightness in your flow
Glad you crossed over to harmony
Like
xx
7th Feb 2017 10:13am
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6th Feb 2017 10:51pm
This may be a little out of character for you but it's pure magic. Seems to me that the ancient dialect is more felt than spoken. It might be a matter of keeping an open mind and heart to hear the language. Loved this departure, Lady Crim.
thank you dearest Sir Crow for showing me love on this right.. yes I believe you are write about keeping an open mind and heart.. love Crim
7th Feb 2017 1:31pm
It would be nice to think that the most ancient of languages was poetry or contained poetry, I try to envisage a world without poetry and contend it only exists in the black page of death.
a beautiful poem :-)
a beautiful poem :-)
7th Feb 2017 1:40pm
what a beautiful thought David thank you for sharing it with me :) love Brenda
9th Feb 2017 3:33am
The sense of a voice moving across galaxies to reach one listener is really potent in this poem, and the spiritual nature of it really well evoked.
11th Feb 2017 5:45pm
thank you Jack I feel as if there is a cosmic voice that tries to reach each of us directly.. love Brenda
9th Feb 2017 4:43pm
Brenda.. such a beautiful ink.. as always your softer side radiates, in this ink.. nicely done.. love..
Dave
Dave
11th Feb 2017 5:47pm
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2017 10:52pm
You are just so multi layered! and thats what i love
3rd Apr 2017 10:54pm
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