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The Iron Maiden
He prefers the innocence
A young girl untouched by heathen hands
Her maidenhead inviolate
To be breached by him alone
He finds a virgin in the field
Her chanson free and clear
Her form graceful in the sun
He offers her some ducats
And leads her astray
All the way to his chamber bed
For her defloration and his ecstasy
As expected she proves unwilling, tight
Her hymen resistant to his thrusts
But by the gods he will prevail
He manages to penetrate
Exulting in her cries
He feels himself her master
And she the lambkin in his thrall
But the withdrawal proves taxing
His member trapped within her walls
He wails for mercy and release
But she throws back her head and sings
Of fallen royalty
Of conquest defied
And the triumph of beauty, blameless and serene.
A young girl untouched by heathen hands
Her maidenhead inviolate
To be breached by him alone
He finds a virgin in the field
Her chanson free and clear
Her form graceful in the sun
He offers her some ducats
And leads her astray
All the way to his chamber bed
For her defloration and his ecstasy
As expected she proves unwilling, tight
Her hymen resistant to his thrusts
But by the gods he will prevail
He manages to penetrate
Exulting in her cries
He feels himself her master
And she the lambkin in his thrall
But the withdrawal proves taxing
His member trapped within her walls
He wails for mercy and release
But she throws back her head and sings
Of fallen royalty
Of conquest defied
And the triumph of beauty, blameless and serene.
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Re. The Iron Maiden
I am absolutely enthrall'd by this one!
yet, there's a sense of sadistic pleasure
here..
maybe wrong and it's what my insides
are screaming for ..but ..o'yes it's there
can taste turbulent hints of it. ..
either way, how vividly you let us
experience this through your sightful
ink.
-Howlings
yet, there's a sense of sadistic pleasure
here..
maybe wrong and it's what my insides
are screaming for ..but ..o'yes it's there
can taste turbulent hints of it. ..
either way, how vividly you let us
experience this through your sightful
ink.
-Howlings
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3rd Feb 2017 8:51pm
I do have a bit of a sadistic streak but I try to confine it to the lines. I do like to see a brute get his comeuppance.
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29th Jan 2017 9:04pm
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3rd Feb 2017 8:51pm
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From a " victim " to a " victor " ! What a most enjoyable twist of fate....the fair damsel not so ' weak '
after all !! I definitely did not imagine that out-come....but neither did her royal pursuer...poor man! :)
Mo Chara...what an outstanding tale your words weave! Your story poems never disappoint!!
after all !! I definitely did not imagine that out-come....but neither did her royal pursuer...poor man! :)
Mo Chara...what an outstanding tale your words weave! Your story poems never disappoint!!
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3rd Feb 2017 8:54pm
Thanks DarkEnchantress. I might be more of a story teller than a poet. I've been trying to blend the two.
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3rd Feb 2017 8:55pm
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30th Jan 2017 3:31pm
predatory, the prey, & persecuted, the predator;
it's a heavy price to pay...
it's a heavy price to pay...
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3rd Feb 2017 8:57pm
Love your alliteration! Only fair that the predator pays a price now and then.
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30th Jan 2017 7:09pm
Sir Crow a very dark invigorating write.. that held me at the edge of my seat..
love the twist at the end..
love Crim
love the twist at the end..
love Crim
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3rd Feb 2017 8:57pm
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1st Feb 2017 12:32pm
This one is a masterpiece! I have always wondered and have even researched what it feels like and what it feels like to be inside a woman. This poem satisfies my curiosities perfectly! It held me captive from beginning to end! Absolutely love it!!
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3rd Feb 2017 9:00pm
Thank you Cyndi. It's been so long for me that I've almost forgotten. Guess my memory hasn't failed quite yet.
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Sir Crow, a brilliant write and the clever imagery of the iron maiden is awesome...she squeezing ever tighter her walls feeling like spikes...intriguing. Bravo! Okay and I'll admit to a "Bill & Ted" chuckle as well.
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3rd Feb 2017 9:01pm