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Dearest Friends
precious dear friends
what words to say
when you are there
only when the day is bright
when the clouds close the blue
lending grey upon the sky
you run for shelter anywhere
never looking back at my door
you are my best friends aren't you
leave me when I need you
its called tough love
so you say, but you just want to go
away from all this troubles
not wanting to know why
or what,how or when
or even care....
I know.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
Published 7th Jan 2017
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7th Jan 2017 5:22am
Grace I must say I relate to this on a deep level, when things get rough to figure out quickly who your real friends are. Honest and up front pen.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
7th Jan 2017 8:16am
Sorry to say I can relate to your feelings on this Grace. Unfortunately there are so many superficial people out there who only want to know you when you're helping them and when you need them they're not around.
I've just started reading a book called 'Light is the new black' and so far it seems to be helping me deal with these things.
Big hugs to you
💜
I've just started reading a book called 'Light is the new black' and so far it seems to be helping me deal with these things.
Big hugs to you
💜
7th Jan 2017 12:41pm
Hi female confession, thank you for dropping by:) and leaving kind comments. I will look up that book...:)
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7th Jan 2017 9:20pm
Difficult times determine not only our character, but that of others as well. A sad but true write, Grace. Best of luck in the comp.
8th Jan 2017 2:57am
9th Jan 2017 4:36am
I find that it is a human trait, almost to a fault to deflect when coming in contact with anything that resembles those things that affect us as well. O, an ode to the "fair-weathered" friend.
Inspired Grace :-)
Inspired Grace :-)
9th Jan 2017 7:34am
Oyes MrM:) I have my fair share of those. Thus I love my solitude. Thank you for reading me.
