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An Existence
living, not merely existing
life to savour vibrant colours
of creation in all its glory
the tapestry woven by Gaia
living, is not mere breathing
but inhaling aromas
of the earth
freshness of each new day
living, is touching hearts
leaving imprints
carving lasting memories
on all you meet
life and living
highway towards the end
each sights a joy
each touch a celebration.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
Published 7th Jan 2017
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7th Jan 2017 5:26am
"living, is not merely breathing
but inhaling aromas
of the earth
freshness of each new day"
I found this incredibly inspiring, I needed to read this today. Thank you for sharing, Grace.
~anonshadow😏
but inhaling aromas
of the earth
freshness of each new day"
I found this incredibly inspiring, I needed to read this today. Thank you for sharing, Grace.
~anonshadow😏
7th Jan 2017 9:17am
7th Jan 2017 9:16pm
I live this essence, Grace. You've defined living moment to moment. Well done and best of in the comp.
7th Jan 2017 11:03pm
9th Jan 2017 4:32am
....penned with a dryads heart. Great ink my Grace. Hope it fares well in competition.
9th Jan 2017 7:33am
9th Jan 2017 8:50am
So much depth in a few verses. I've only just discovered your writing, but I like it.
9th Jan 2017 10:57am
9th Jan 2017 11:33pm
You live life to the fullest and it's reflected in these lines. I like the distinction you make between life and existence. Life can be a thrill. Existence is just going through the motions, not living in any meaningful sense. Fine write Grace!
10th Jan 2017 11:50am
Thank you Crowfly:) yes living life to the fullest is wonderful, isn't it. Each day as we want it.
