Lust's Hostage

so much sorrow in your poem, Crim,
naked & of lust denied;
the prison that incarcerates us all...

thank you John indeed i'm lust's prisoner..

love Crim

Poet lust

Know it well

Sad, raw , expert

Like

Made me sad tho

x

thank you Poet for feeling this write in it's sad hue..

love Brenda

know the feeling. A sucky feeling at times ^^

Great write Crim :-)

thank you DC yes unfulfilled desire does suck at times..

love Crim

Achingly beautiful. 💓
A longing I know all too well.
You expressed it all so perfectly.  

thank you lovely Heart for understanding..

love Crim

You've infused your words with such potent sadness and beauty that I ache just reading them.  Always a struggle when the muse holds us captive with no hope of relief.  Beautiful, Brenda
Willow

thank you beautiful Willow for feeling my ache..

love Brenda

Eh . . . That is how it is many times in this cruel old world . . . .
We give and give, n'er to be satisfied.

thank you Jerry not being satisfied keeps me hungry which I kind of like :)

love Brenda

Be as Shakespeare in "Shakespeare in Love" - make them an eternal muse of the heart

thank you Sage one what a beautiful idea :)

love Brenda

Poetry of Love is becoming you, my Queen.
Each layer peeled and exposed is shedding light from what harbors within [you].
Amazed and mesmerized is what I am.

Love to you, Devlin

thank you my Dark Queen for showing me so much love :)

love you lady..

xo Brenda

Did you mean 'fed my poetry' rather than 'that fed me poetry'? That quibble aside you once again manage to find a dark and depraved subject and put such an achingly beautiful shine on it that leaves us wanting more. If only to see those brown eyes and pluck them out to receive such adoration.

thank you Lord Viddax i'm flattered by your comment..

I can see what you mean by fed my poetry rather then fed me poetry but yes that is what I intended.. as my lust for him is like the fuel to the fire it feeds me poetry..

love Crim

Always amazing me with your lovely words, Crim, a lonely ache resonates
through me as I read...

thank you lovely Kasai for such a beautiful comment..

love Crim

we are all in prisons of our own making, some are just more plush than others - prison really sucks :-(

this poem really expresses so well that captured feeling - excellent Ink :-)

thank you David yes sigh prisons of our own making so true..

love Brenda

I hate to see you in captivity, Crim.  Otherwise I was enthralled if saddened.  You shall be released one day.  Beautiful job!

thank you Sir Crow though no need to be saddened it keeps my poetry alive :)

love Crim

You've always written so namazingly Brenda.

Like a fine wine You get better with age.

  Pan

aw thank you Pan :)

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, each line in this caused minds eye to capture the most serene images...and to the last two stanzas, I say keep them there, within minds eye and within your heart because regardless they gift you the inspiration to create such magnificence...I bow to you lovely one...

I love you so much!

xoxo Taryn  

thank you my beautiful one for understanding it is the hunger that drives a poet I think ;)

I love you so much..

xo Brenda

Brenda.. the sting of your words, swell my mind.. you're so brave my sister.. baring your soul to us all.. you're a fighter, and survivor.. and always inspire me.. forever your brother, i love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave my brother..

I love you..

xo Brenda

Dear Crim, how I feel this one...

"each line of your body
a verse of seduction" > such beauty in these lines!

Damn, I wish words weren't so powerful...

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende yes the power of the poet's pen sigh makes us all melt :)

love Crim