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Haiku/Senryu New Year Wish🙏🏻
1
where e'er you may live
be the spirit of the wind
for both weak & strong
2
take care of each one
who has touched your heart & soul
and has lifted you
3
free one from anguish
the year was grim for many
and one will free you
4
my simple wishes
like smooth pebbles on the shore
come and be the wave
5
take these pebbles for
creatures that run, fly and swim
they carry you too
6
for the plants and trees
and know that earth will thank you
with the air we breathe
7
both the rain that falls
and the snow on mountain peaks
be the clouds that guide
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while the shadows pass
be the seagull's lonely cry
on the thunder's tide
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to ride till coasting
o'er the monuments of time
of your life and mine
Published 27th Dec 2016
| Edited 5th Jan 2020
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27th Dec 2016 11:17pm
28th Dec 2016 3:01am
Why thank you, I blush in light of your appreciation and kindness, my dearest Grace. with love for the new year - Jadey🎏
28th Dec 2016 00:42am
28th Dec 2016 3:34am
28th Dec 2016 9:03am
A lovely bit of hope to bring in the new year. A joy to read, Jade.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
28th Dec 2016 9:57am
Thank you so much, Anon, I'm moved by your embrace & support.
And my best wishes to you for a blessed New Year!🎉
-Jadey🎏
And my best wishes to you for a blessed New Year!🎉
-Jadey🎏
28th Dec 2016 2:12pm
That's the most beautiful New Year wish I've seen in a very long time. Happy New Year, Jade! :)
Willow
Willow
28th Dec 2016 11:48pm
And a blessed New Year to you, dear Willow, and thank you for your beautiful share & embrace!
-Jade🎏
-Jade🎏
28th Dec 2016 4:14pm
29th Dec 2016 1:14am
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29th Dec 2016 1:18am
Aahh, thank you! And you, your starry constellations, dear Celestial sis!✨
28th Dec 2016 5:45pm
29th Dec 2016 1:25am
I thank you, dear Ahavati, for your gracious receive & beautiful express.
-Jade🎏
-Jade🎏
29th Dec 2016 12:57pm
Excellent writing, jadey... I truly appreciate your work in short form...
This is a wonderful example...
Old Tom...
This is a wonderful example...
Old Tom...
Why thank you, tomcat, I always feel good when you or anyone embraces short form works because it's use is misunderstood & under appreciated by many, including other poets!😳
29th Dec 2016 7:38pm
Excellent collection of haikus, Jade. My favorite:
while the shadows pass
be the seagull's lonely cry
on the thunder's tide
But it's a tough call. All of these are lovely and evocative. A joyous New Year to you Jade!
while the shadows pass
be the seagull's lonely cry
on the thunder's tide
But it's a tough call. All of these are lovely and evocative. A joyous New Year to you Jade!
30th Dec 2016 8:08am
Thank you, my crowfly friend, for your wonderful comment, and your wishes... and to you as well!
