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sorry everyone I gasped...
having coffee in the bookshop
when I start to choke
and it feels like my throat's closed
and I'm making the most awful noises
trying to suck some air into my lungs
but it ain't getting close
and the times getting on
and I'm thinking maybe I'm going to die
with the beatles playing in the background
and people thumping me on the back
and everyone gathered around and
then gradually
the throat seems a little less taut
and the sweat and the tension
and the panic all slowly begin to ebb
until finally all I've left
is the acute awareness of
how close is death
and a rather tricky social
situation...
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Re. sorry, everyone, I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 00:13am
Re: Re. sorry, everyone, I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 00:20am
guess that's what near death experiences do
for one -
I mean, bloody hell, they almost
do for one...
for one -
I mean, bloody hell, they almost
do for one...
Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 1:28am
glad you pulled thru pally,
hate for you to get taken out by a lousy cup'a joe (never touch the stuff meself)
hate for you to get taken out by a lousy cup'a joe (never touch the stuff meself)
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Re: Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 6:36pm
from blind panic to mere embarrassment in
a matter of minutes
don't normally get that
even with absinthe
a matter of minutes
don't normally get that
even with absinthe
Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 2:17am
That was a terrifying read! I had to remind myself to breathe while I was reading. I'm so glad you were able to write this!
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 6:39pm
if things had turned out differently
you could have read it
in the press... :)
you could have read it
in the press... :)
Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 12:33pm
Re: Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 6:45pm
Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 8:45pm
I'm glad you pulled through it. Been there and done that - it's very frightening when it happens.
Yes; it does remind us that mortality is just a breath (or lack of ) away at any given moment.
Yes; it does remind us that mortality is just a breath (or lack of ) away at any given moment.
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Re: Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 10:31pm
mind you, dying in a bookshop
with the beatles playing in the
background...I mean, it wasn't
the setting or the soundtrack,
simply the timing...
with the beatles playing in the
background...I mean, it wasn't
the setting or the soundtrack,
simply the timing...
Re: Re. sorry everyone I gasped...
13th Dec 2016 10:41pm
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13th Dec 2016 11:22pm
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15th Dec 2016 00:48am