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Fire, my fascination
Is it
my love
for the elements
or my
predisposition
to my end
that I feel
peaceful
near the vents
may be
it's the heat
a ubiquitous
warming friend!
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Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:13pm
Re. Fire, my fascination
11th Dec 2016 4:48pm
Ahhh . . . Seeking out the fire from beyond is actually a natural situation. Seek on, my friend!
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Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:37pm
Welcome dear Friend!!
Thank You Jerry for your positive insight and presence!!
KDAmB
Thank You Jerry for your positive insight and presence!!
KDAmB
Re. Fire, my fascination
11th Dec 2016 4:51pm
For me it's the dance and the warmth...mesmerizing and comforting. Well done! :)
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Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:39pm
Welcome dear Friend Willows!
true...indeed it is mesmerizing and comforting! Thank You so much my friend for the kind appreciaiton and visit!!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
true...indeed it is mesmerizing and comforting! Thank You so much my friend for the kind appreciaiton and visit!!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Fire, my fascination
Anonymous
11th Dec 2016 4:52pm
One ...always wants closeness of warmth. It fills the heart and soul.
Captivating piece 💓
Captivating piece 💓
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Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:41pm
Welcome dear MsHeart!
and why not..it's the way we're made I believe that we seek warmth both metaphorical and physical sense! Humbled by you appreciation my friend!!
regards
KDAmB
and why not..it's the way we're made I believe that we seek warmth both metaphorical and physical sense! Humbled by you appreciation my friend!!
regards
KDAmB
Re. Fire, my fascination
Anonymous
11th Dec 2016 8:38pm
Thanks for the great poem.🔥🔥🔥
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Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:43pm
Welcome dear friend!
'warmly' appreciate your visit and appreciation. Thank You once again bro!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
'warmly' appreciate your visit and appreciation. Thank You once again bro!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Fire, my fascination
12th Dec 2016 7:30am
Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:44pm
and that's what we indeed seek. I welcome your visit and warm appreciation of the scribble, means a lot to me!!
Thank You Bro Anon!!
regards
KDAmB
Thank You Bro Anon!!
regards
KDAmB
Re. Fire, my fascination
12th Dec 2016 7:12pm
Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:47pm
:-)
Welcome my dear Freind!
I am glad a poet like you enjoyed this little scribble. Humbled indeed I am by your kind appreciation.
Thank You!!
Welcome my dear Freind!
I am glad a poet like you enjoyed this little scribble. Humbled indeed I am by your kind appreciation.
Thank You!!
Re. Fire, my fascination
12th Dec 2016 7:57pm
I only hope you are not a moth :-(
excellent piece, description puts the reader right there :-)
excellent piece, description puts the reader right there :-)
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Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:52pm
Moth is pronounced similar to the word Maut(Hindi,Arabic,Urdu) and that means death. The relation between a moth and fire is ubiquitously used in poetry in these languages. The so called suicidal/sacrificial romance of a moth with fire.. and thankfully am not a Moth!
Dave! Welcome Sir!
I've said I am humbled earlier as well and will repeat the same as that's how I'm feeling with such appreciaiton from poets like you whom I admire so much!!
Thank you Dave!!
KDAmB
Dave! Welcome Sir!
I've said I am humbled earlier as well and will repeat the same as that's how I'm feeling with such appreciaiton from poets like you whom I admire so much!!
Thank you Dave!!
KDAmB
Re: Re. Fire, my fascination
15th Dec 2016 9:53pm
Welcome bro Cheesa!
always means a lot- yours visit and such kind and generous support!
Thank You!
always means a lot- yours visit and such kind and generous support!
Thank You!