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existence
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it's not a beginning
that charts our course
but an ending
one cannot begin
to catalog remembering
until departing origin
between birth and death
lies a balance of Earthly
hope and experience
thus beginning to end
is eternally archived
from each existence
until we return from
the womb we were born
~
image: Repin Sadko
it's not a beginning
that charts our course
but an ending
one cannot begin
to catalog remembering
until departing origin
between birth and death
lies a balance of Earthly
hope and experience
thus beginning to end
is eternally archived
from each existence
until we return from
the womb we were born
~
image: Repin Sadko
Published 8th Dec 2016
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8th Dec 2016 9:09pm
Every beginning has an end and every end is another beginning. One of those cycle things. Beautifully written, Ahavati ☺
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8th Dec 2016 9:32pm
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2016 10:25pm
Truly love this piece, and all in which it represents.
So very true, and beautifully woven together. 💓
So very true, and beautifully woven together. 💓
Anonymous
8th Dec 2016 10:28pm
Ahavti, interestingly enough, i was just penning something very similar to this theme but your poem summarizes perfectly.
8th Dec 2016 10:36pm
ok, the ending may chart the course,
but I like the bit in the middle, where
we all get lost... :)
but I like the bit in the middle, where
we all get lost... :)
8th Dec 2016 10:41pm
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8th Dec 2016 11:16pm
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9th Dec 2016 1:15am
Excellent! The birth of mankind, the happiness and joy, the trials and tribulations we experience, is merely the journey toward from whence we came. You wrote this well.
Yes, Ahavati:) you are so right...the destination is all the same. Only the journey matters.
9th Dec 2016 6:26am
Loved the art you chose here, and such a profound bit of poetry.
As always, thanks for an amazing read...
As always, thanks for an amazing read...
9th Dec 2016 11:37am
mystical poetry;
novels, novellas, or short stories,
thru chapter & verse...
novels, novellas, or short stories,
thru chapter & verse...
Anonymous
9th Dec 2016 3:05pm
is it a coincidence how this vibe
suits the mood i woke to this morning
thank you for the clarity Ahavati..
suits the mood i woke to this morning
thank you for the clarity Ahavati..
9th Dec 2016 4:51pm
treasuries of beauty here and mystical charm, a sparse little poem that runs deep
(and a cool choice of painting too boot!)
very well done my friend
(and a cool choice of painting too boot!)
very well done my friend
10th Dec 2016 4:09pm
existence....wotta con'cept.....
eye dunno whatothink
anymore
a lovely read you've wrote nonetheless
eye dunno whatothink
anymore
a lovely read you've wrote nonetheless
10th Dec 2016 4:13pm
such an elegantly beautiful write Sage one..
that gives so much peace of mind..
love Brenda
that gives so much peace of mind..
love Brenda
15th Dec 2016 1:57pm
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2016 7:24pm
Ahavati, I have been on this site for 2 1/2 years...and even though I "know" you....seen your comments repeatedly, seen you on the top poems in last 30 days over and over and over, a permanent fixture...I will be honest and say I have no idea why I never stopped by for a read before...but "change" is one of the things in this life which is guaranteed...ironic...
Today I opened you up and randomly clicked and this...this speaks to me in so many ways more than just one and if you don't mind, I'm going to hold onto it...uplifting ink...Thank you for gracing us with this piece...
xoxo Taryn
Today I opened you up and randomly clicked and this...this speaks to me in so many ways more than just one and if you don't mind, I'm going to hold onto it...uplifting ink...Thank you for gracing us with this piece...
xoxo Taryn
20th Jan 2017 2:21am
