Delirium

God damn!!! I could crawl into your mind, curl up, and pass out!! Your mind is not dull like a butter knife, it's as sharp as a razor blade!! Seriously, if you could see my facial expressions, and hear my histrionic commentary as I'm reading your work, see: the above God damn!! Lol!!  

And one more very enthusiastic GOD DAMN!! About the pic you picked! So hot!

thank you Chaotic you got me smiling ear to ear with your comment :)

love Crim

Aww!! Hell yeah! That's what I'm talking about! I'm all about returning some smiles!

thank you Chaotic you always bring joy to my darkest days :)

love Crim

thank you Adam solider of life for letting me know i'm not alone..

love Brenda

You always use the most incredible juxtapositions. Switchblade and frosting...You're like cut crystal...so many brilliant facets. ☺
Willow

thank you beautiful Willow for such a lovely comment :)

love Brenda

...this fog will pass...take it from one who knows....great ink :D

thank you SS I'm just trying to follow the white lines on the road until it does..

love Brenda

Great write...reminiscent of Bukowski...
Love the artistic flare of the pic...if the pic's your handiwork, I hope you're doing something with that ability...

thank you Kate for such a fantastic comment alas the pic is from the internet I can't take credit for it..

love Crim

Hey Crim....so with you on this one.....many of my writes have come from out of my head moments.......but truly.....regardless of your state of mind......soul or heart......you're a wonderful poetess and friend to so many.....tipping my pen in respect and admiration.......you're one of the most read.......followed and luved souls on here......purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower you have such a giving heart.. this soul deeply appreciates you :)

love Crim

Brenda.. i felt every word, and doubt in this write.. we all know the struggle, that biased rhythm.. by the way that picture is perfect.. pussy and alcohol, are kinda of intertwined if that makes sense.. love you!!



Dave

thank you graciously Dave yes pussy and alcohol ;)

love Brenda

From the outside looking in, inside your head looks like Wonderland. Can I come in?

aw thank you Anna by all means welcome to my world :)

love Crim

I love how you displace the pain and uncertainty in art, Brenda. Gonna have to disagree about the lost edge considering you just won a comp. ;)  

thank you dearest Sage one this is pain i'm expressing.. I was caught utterly by surprise by that win.. I haven't really been feeling so fierce lately and it scares me it's my protection..

love Brenda

Your head seems fine to me Crim.  I think this malaise will pass given time.  Your talent's obviously still here, no doubt about it.  I'm glad to see the note of "just writing out a bad day."  You're a marvel any day at all far as I'm concerned.  Excellent work!

I do hope it passes Sir Crow thank you for sticking around for the ride in the mean time..

love Crim

Seems to me your edge is still razor sharp, Crim, a finely honed edge. Maybe when we replace the handle of the blade it just takes us time to get the feel of it again...

thank you lovely Kasai what a wonderful way to see things..

love Crim

I just sat here like WOW... That's right on!

thank you dearest Kandy for getting this write..

love Crim

when I saw the title for this one I wasn't going to read it - after my last amputation I ended up with Post Operative Delirium - the scariest three weeks of my life so far - here I am 4 months down the line and I still have left over symptoms - thank fuck it was about the demon drink :-)

as always your poetry is wonderful :-)

i'm so sorry David the title brought back flashbacks of such a terrible time in your life.. thank you for reading and getting through it..

love Brenda

Seems like I'm living those days now. You captured my reality.

thank you for your comment Xmar only sorry you can relate..

love Brenda