The Lion's Den

The first two lines drew me in immediately...
so much beauty in just two lines!

Love this one, dear Crim!
Such a pure and hopeful piece!

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende for showing this write love..

xo Crim

thank you most kindly Adam..

love Brenda

thank you beautiful Amelia yes my soul is seeking the enchanted..

love Crim

It's a rude awakening to the asphalt jungle, particularly after dreams (or memories) of a more magical world.  The Ancient Ones and Mother Earth will guide us if we care to listen.

"connecting with her    
and all that hums with life    
recharges a lost girl"

I'll go with the life force over death wish anytime.  That should protect me in the lion's den.  Love your spirituality, lost girl.      

thank you Sir Crow yes just a soul searching..

love Crim

This shows such strength Crim. Really enjoyed ^^

"the Earth takes me in her bosom    
sees a child that has wandered    
too far into the danger zone    
fast living and the like"

Those and the last lines were just brilliant! :-)

thank you dearest DC..

love Crim

I love the upbeat theme which came out at the last verse. I totally, one hundred percent relate.

thank you Jerry for getting this write..

love Brenda

This an amazing and deep
and strength-filled write
Brenda.

  Thomas

thank you Thomas most graciously..

love Brenda

a strange and dreamy write - this is really you!

excellent write :-)

thank you David for showing love to this write..

love Brenda

This ink is filled with a spirituality that touches the reader's spirit. Very nicely done my dear lady :)

thank you dearest Poe for getting this write and for feeling the spirit of it..

love Crim

Brenda.. just simply blown away.. love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave my friend..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, serene tranquility and strength before us here lovely one.

I love you so much

xoxo Taryn

thank you my beautiful one for showing me love on this write..

I love you :)

xo Brenda

'connecting with her      
and all that hums with life      
recharges a lost girl'

A lost girl,a survivor of the lions den, beautiful words, Crim...

thank you lovely Kasai for the love on this poem..

xo Crim

courageous poetry, Crim;
sometimes we need to confront those lions, but not today...

thank you John today I seek refuge to fight them another day..

love Crim

Read this a couple of times

Love the hard edge within the gentle

You are evolving always,  love that in your writing ...

Xxoo

thank you Poet we are all ever evolving I think day to day..

love Brenda

The first 2 lines and I was hooked in completely.  Beautiful write, Brenda!  To reconnect with nature and heal...I wish everyone could experience it, even once.  :)

thank you beautiful Willow..

love Brenda

This is the vein I absolutely ADORE, Brenda. Nature is the most beautiful healer I know. She just waits for her children to come home. Love and listed. xo

thank you graciously Sage one such a blessing you are..

love Brenda

You are just pure beautiful my ladyloves
and missed you are.

I am going to find you ;)

Love you, hope all is ok darling of mine

i'm here my lovely Malady just not feeling too good lately. thank you dear one..

love Crim

I am ashamed to say it took me this long to read this gem. Sometimes you just need time to reconnect with yourself and I think this piece conveys that message. Superb ink, my friend.

thank you graciously my Darkest Lord no worries on missing this earlier I deeply appreciate all your visits to my pages..

love Crim