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Rain always puts me to sleep
In the middle of night before,
I awoke to the sound of rain
In what seemed like a sated roar
Of their deep voices, of their stain.
'Twas a dream in my half-aware,
I questioned its validity
Then dozed off like it wasn't there,
This weather-beaten mystery.
Then yesterday passed like my thoughts
Adrift, clouds hid daylight away.
I watched what the weather had wrought,
Then fell back to sleep where I lay.
The afternoon walked in on me
And claimed "It's been raining, y'know."
I vaguely looked over to see,
And murmured "I want you to go."
The day turned away as it sighed,
Went gray, fading into the wall.
I knew it had made up a lie,
And slept hoping raindrops will fall.
I awoke to the sound of rain
In what seemed like a sated roar
Of their deep voices, of their stain.
'Twas a dream in my half-aware,
I questioned its validity
Then dozed off like it wasn't there,
This weather-beaten mystery.
Then yesterday passed like my thoughts
Adrift, clouds hid daylight away.
I watched what the weather had wrought,
Then fell back to sleep where I lay.
The afternoon walked in on me
And claimed "It's been raining, y'know."
I vaguely looked over to see,
And murmured "I want you to go."
The day turned away as it sighed,
Went gray, fading into the wall.
I knew it had made up a lie,
And slept hoping raindrops will fall.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 31st Oct 2016
| Edited 16th Feb 2018
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Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
31st Oct 2016 10:00pm
Very sad. Rain is a visitor for the lonely but dampens the night...
The rain cries out it's song as it splashes down to feed the hungry mouths of living things that make no sound...
JJ
The rain cries out it's song as it splashes down to feed the hungry mouths of living things that make no sound...
JJ
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Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
31st Oct 2016 10:12pm
Oh my, thank you Joe for your thoughts on your reading of my piece. My reaction of disbelief when rain comes, having lived through a five-year drought. --Jadey☔️
Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
1st Nov 2016 00:52am
I know the feeling. I keep hoping for some precipitation around here but the drought continues. Even a little rain is a thrill these days. Beautifully written with an aptly melancholy last stanza. The forecast calls for Jade...
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Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
1st Nov 2016 1:14am
Oh my dear, dear crowfly friend. How well you read this, both of us knowing intimately the epic event of these years. My humble thanks. And yes, if the forecast calls for me, guaranteed, expect a deluge!
Jade☔️
Jade☔️
Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
3rd Nov 2016 10:30pm
Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
1st Nov 2016 6:29am
Beautiful piece. I see you've taken a liking to centered Georgian italicized.
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Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
Oh yes, sir Void, you showed how lovely the combination looks, though I will be selective which pieces I ordain the style depending on the mood I feel it suits. And thank you, I'm pleased at your appreciation of my piece.
Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
1st Nov 2016 6:45am
I adore this piece of poetry Jade!❤
I love rain, long rainy Saturdays are what I live for. It sorta makes me wish it were raining right now.
~anonshadow😏
I love rain, long rainy Saturdays are what I live for. It sorta makes me wish it were raining right now.
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
I'm honored by your reception & enjoyment of this piece, my friend! My early childhood was a time of as much rain as I could wish for. But then it came less & less. I miss it so, and when it does come on rare occasions these times, I hesitate to open my arms wide to the precious gift, knowing it won't stay long, if at all. I remember long rainy Saturdays, and Mondays when it was time to go back to school after the weekends were over. A blessing on Saturdays when I could sleep in, lulled by the sound of rain on the roof and hearing it gush through the downspouts into the ivy. A curse dashing between bus stops and racing down the street toward the school before the bell rang...
Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
1st Nov 2016 8:39am
Rain has always been a friend to me , even when I found myself running for shelter...
But to hear the rain falling when inside warm and dry lulls a peace within and makes me think of hot drinks and cartoons...
Thanks for taking me there...
geoff
But to hear the rain falling when inside warm and dry lulls a peace within and makes me think of hot drinks and cartoons...
Thanks for taking me there...
geoff
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Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
1st Nov 2016 8:48am
Thank you, Geoffrey, for sharing your enjoyment of my little ode. My childhood will archive times like you've mentioned as long as I can recall them. If only things could stay like that. At least I was able to take you there.
-tig
-tig
Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
Anonymous
5th Nov 2016 1:21am
I haven't slept in days but need it so,
perhaps I will soon enough, thank
you for this beauty
perhaps I will soon enough, thank
you for this beauty
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Re: Re. Rain always puts me to sleep☔️
5th Nov 2016 2:05am
Thank you, darling Malady, to come here ( as I've missed you ), to embrace my little ode, and to hold on to the hope for sleep, which I too pray will be soon. --Jade xo
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