~silent song~

Ah. such wonderment and beauty within the lines of this poem.
The search for answers, somehow elusively slips away.
Please keep searching, the answers you need will soon show
themselves. This poem touched me big time, Brenda.

thank you Jerry on quiet feet I will continue to see happy you felt this..

love Brenda

A very moving and tender write Crim.  

hidden are the mysteries  
from a mind that searches
eyes that have gone gray
glazed over and now blind

This is something I'm feeling a little more each day if not yet going blind.  Must be getting old....

thank you Sir Crow you are forever young dear soul..

love Crim

Ahh, another one...your silent song is gorgeous, my lady! More tears...

thank you most graciously lovely Willow..

love Brenda

oh wow!!!

thank you dear one..

love Crim

indeed Adam thank you..

love Brenda

Truly breathtaking.
I love this beautiful, enchanted write. I felt the passion overflowing.
Lovely ink, dear Crim 💓

thank you beautiful Heart for hearing my quiet passion..

love Crim

Warmth reaches to the depths of the soul now turn up the volume of your song so the one you sing silently can hear...
JJ

thank you JJ they heard :)

love Brenda

be calm be cool.........
sweet psuedo-allegory

bless ye, dear

thank you Daniel for feeling me..

love Brenda

Brenda.. so brilliantly done.. loved this ink.. and love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave my brother I love you :)

xo Brenda

Oh goodness... Where to start?

The first 2 lines knocked me clean out..
the silence. the solitude in that
would haunt anyone. I relate so strongly I'm thinking..huh? You know...for me it holds it & we all can learn to live alone by the second. You had me tightly bound and attentive imediately (im so grateful) in the third..

Thank you Crim

They rock!

thank you dearest AL a better understanding and love of this write I couldn't have hoped for..

love Brenda

This was a very interesting
write Brenda and felt on a
lot of levels as I think that
we connect on a deep wave
length in a lot of aspects.

the spirits are stirred
a whirlwind of discontent  
 
my wilted petals
tossed into the eye of the storm
with hopes to bring a sweet aroma

The first stanza that I copy/pasted
above really stuck-out to me, as I
feel them a lot stirring within me also.

  Dantalyon

thank you Dantalyon for reaching with your mind to the ethereal plane and understanding and feeling this write..

love Brenda

Breathtakingly beautiful, dear Crim!

Made me think of 'Bridge over Troubled Water'
You left me a bit speechless, so I'll leave it at that...

Love, Duende

thank you graciously beautiful Duende..

love Crim

Precious Crim......what a warm feeling ink......my heart feels so calm reading this......gorgeous......I'm actually speechless of how this made me feel......it's so gentle to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you my loving Flower so happy this brought calm to your shores.. is what I intended..

love Crim

You have left me breathless, malady... I hear you.. I believe you are beautiful and kind.
🌹🌹Trish

thank you beautiful Trish for seeing my soul in this..

love you..

xo Brenda

thank you lovely Amelia for showing love to this write..

love Crim

sensational lyrics hushed in the vibrating air, Crim.
I hear it's peaceful in the eye of the storm -
haven't found it yet...

thank you John it either be find the eye of the storm at this point or be utterly decimated..  
 
love Crim

Such tender,beautiful poetry from a talented lady. Nicely done,Crim...

thank you lovely Kasai..

love Crim

Wilted petals of the silence before the storm

Very fine write

thank you graciously dearest Whale..

love Crim

I relax and lay back
into your beautiful words
I allow myself to be carried
onwards so that I might rest
a while in your poetry
your words make us one
and help me to carry on
I thank you for your skill
for your art and your beauty
it is with that, that I know
I will never be alone again
I need not fear the dark
of the knife monsters
or of those with flaming wings
your words make me invisible
your words protect me
your words keep me safe
I can only thank you
for writing them

:-)

thank you David I will always hold you and the poem you wrote me close to my heart..

love Brenda

tiny gods
i've missed your poetry brenda
this is a truly stirring read,
your imagery is beautiful
and the gentle tones
hold me captive...
... simply loved
xo