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drifter
burned parchment skin
under rust color skies
cobwebs collect dust
in the corners of my mind
woven thoughts made of dreams
drifter of the universe
looking for an anchor
in your serendipitous sand
while it shifts under foot
the world sways
in time with music
sung in verse
written in the stars
each syllable
keeps time with our heartbeat
the flow is warm now
comfort to the weary
close your eyes
hear the operatic ballet
as it plays it's lonely song
sung from each heart
a concerto of the free
I'm a seeker, a seer
diviner of truth
scry in the tempest storm
foretell what is to come
fade to black
the mist is thick now
too many voices
vie to be heard
hush child and wait
all will be revealed in time
under rust color skies
cobwebs collect dust
in the corners of my mind
woven thoughts made of dreams
drifter of the universe
looking for an anchor
in your serendipitous sand
while it shifts under foot
the world sways
in time with music
sung in verse
written in the stars
each syllable
keeps time with our heartbeat
the flow is warm now
comfort to the weary
close your eyes
hear the operatic ballet
as it plays it's lonely song
sung from each heart
a concerto of the free
I'm a seeker, a seer
diviner of truth
scry in the tempest storm
foretell what is to come
fade to black
the mist is thick now
too many voices
vie to be heard
hush child and wait
all will be revealed in time
Published 13th Oct 2016
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13th Oct 2016 6:00am
enchanting verses, Crim,
that foretell a herald of wonder.
where the wind blows, the drifter goes...
that foretell a herald of wonder.
where the wind blows, the drifter goes...
13th Oct 2016 9:03am
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 6:29am
"I'm a seeker, a seer
diviner of truth
scry in the tempest storm
foretell what is to come'' I love this. I find being alone, for me... is comforting now.
🙏Trish
diviner of truth
scry in the tempest storm
foretell what is to come'' I love this. I find being alone, for me... is comforting now.
🙏Trish
13th Oct 2016 9:04am
13th Oct 2016 6:31am
My dear Crim, this is so enchantingly beautiful!
I'm a seeker, a seer
diviner of truth > love these lines, the prashing is just brilliant in this poem!
Love that last stanza!!! The picture is a beauty as well :-)
I'm a seeker, a seer
diviner of truth > love these lines, the prashing is just brilliant in this poem!
Love that last stanza!!! The picture is a beauty as well :-)
13th Oct 2016 9:05am
13th Oct 2016 8:47am
Such a beautiful drift through your poetry,lovely flowing words that carry us along with them.
Thank you for sharing your journey...
Thank you for sharing your journey...
13th Oct 2016 9:06am
Anonymous
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13th Oct 2016 4:21pm
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 12:38pm
So very beautiful and truly enchanting, lovely Crim 💓
Drifting into the moments where we seek that comfort and serenity.
I love the journey you took us on, in this ink.
Drifting into the moments where we seek that comfort and serenity.
I love the journey you took us on, in this ink.
13th Oct 2016 4:22pm
13th Oct 2016 1:09pm
The title tricked me. Thought it was going to be a edgy piece and then I was brought into a line of beauty .....
Dreamy
Like
Dreamy
Like
13th Oct 2016 4:23pm
was tricky business titling this one I almost changed it to Gypsy.. so pleased you enjoyed Poet :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
13th Oct 2016 1:37pm
Oh, how exquisite is this! You beautiful creature, you have done it again. Brought me to tears with the beauty of your words.
13th Oct 2016 4:24pm
13th Oct 2016 2:46pm
I love the imagery, the mystery and the flow of this poetry Brenda! Outstanding verse!
JJ
JJ
13th Oct 2016 4:24pm
13th Oct 2016 3:16pm
Beautiful! 'Nuff said. But I'm gonna say more anyway.
I was happily impressed with your offering this morning,
Brenda. Such a comforting piece of writing, and I was
in the need of comfort this day. Thank you!
I was happily impressed with your offering this morning,
Brenda. Such a comforting piece of writing, and I was
in the need of comfort this day. Thank you!
13th Oct 2016 4:25pm
thank you Jerry i'm so happy this brought you some comfort today :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
13th Oct 2016 8:33pm
good'gawd, watta legion of fans. I'm jealous. Dispite that, tis a well-wrought write.
14th Oct 2016 1:40am
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Oct 2016 8:59pm
13th Oct 2016 8:58pm
Ah, a lot of sentiments that I can appreciate. Child of the universe.
Enjoyed this read :)
Enjoyed this read :)
14th Oct 2016 1:38am
13th Oct 2016 11:38pm
Ah, there is the rare spiritual and magical side shown once again. A hauntingly divine piece as ever, as though a terrible mirage and unforgettable portent. This part is my favourite:
"woven thoughts made of dreams
drifter of the universe
looking for an anchor
in your serendipitous sand
while it shifts under foot"
Makes me long to jump on a sand skiff and go on an adventure to find such a pictured place.
"woven thoughts made of dreams
drifter of the universe
looking for an anchor
in your serendipitous sand
while it shifts under foot"
Makes me long to jump on a sand skiff and go on an adventure to find such a pictured place.
14th Oct 2016 1:40am
thank you most kindly Lord V. love your vision of this piece together we shall sojourn there..
love Brenda
love Brenda
13th Oct 2016 11:43pm
14th Oct 2016 1:40am
Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 4:02am
Totally speechless.. i bow to you!! lovely one!!
Dave
Dave
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15th Oct 2016 6:57pm
Congratulations, Brenda! This poem was chosen as our Poet of the Month's Feature Poem.
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15th Oct 2016 7:02pm
